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This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

Daubs Stays on my dick...Fuck textin'..this niggaz spittin "Key Sex"..
Ya names similar to your Bars.....after the 3rd letter, Ya Shits BS..

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You wouldnt be Kon.Tay.Juz...if you were taken ill with chicken-pox..
And your punches are packed with pussy....like watchin a kitten box

lol...tied, i can't pick niether.

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how come nobody is voting on this fuckin shit.......

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

ok both were kinda played btu kon had a little bit of creativity i like ur opener with the nameplay bs line pretty good lol like the magunum line lmao last bar not sure if he changed his sig? or if its a fake personal?
ok daubs this is the worst ive ever seen from u what happened?
first bar that line is played against him
2nd bar pretty good crew line was bad all filler though
3rd bar u have wordplay but not a good personal really lol
overal ok battle please rtf on one of these
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210496

uppin this battle....................................

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uppin this battle famz.................................

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Daubs
You use a normal style of punches, really basic style. I didn't even see much personals in there. the flow was cool but really you need to hit harder wit personls man, get at em harder, twist words more. some of your lines were alright but just not feelin em like you tried hard or anything, you should try harder man.

Kon
yours aint much better I used to read your shit and be like damn but you kinda seem weaker now lol, but I still think you got this, not much personals used in your verse either but I still feel you used his name more instead of being self glorified so much, and you even twisted words in a complex way. overall I think you got it Kon

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yea i came weak...

so did he.
weak battle, but we bothed keyed up quick.

up...

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Cause Daubs said he gave up..........................Dunno why...