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This was feedback posted for Mike McGuire
 

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Voted For: Mike McGuire

Infinte Stan first:
Ok I think your rhyme was ok. It punches were not hard and your structure was a little off. Your strongest bar was probably: "runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill
if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill"! NO disrespect but there was alot of self glorification in the verse too! I think you should focus more on your punches adn personals when you batttle!

Mike McGuire:
Your structure was not that good homie but your punches hit harder than Infinites! The line of yours i liked was "You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit
Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis" I thought it was kind of clever! Again its your structure add more personals and that's it!

So I give this battle to Mike McGuire!

Dope shit emcees! Peace & Hip Hop!

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Voted For: Mike McGuire

Nice job on obth, but
Mike Had better Vocab, punches, better overall verse..nice job to both

V/Mike McGuire