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Voted For: Deranged
u a pussy...a puppy with his tail between his leg,house or in street this dude's shook at me..in front me..on his knees...beggin for no beef^^ ^^heh, ok retarded MC's startin to bleed from when I stab ur neck n turn it blue and ur mind's phased..cuz in ur profile....you still reppin 2 crews ^^meh, weak and to top it off...you a faggot..eatin cocks n tastin..what is this? tied up with more buea's(bows) than Playstation's at christmas ^^simple but okish i ain't steppin to you..u already squashed up..n seein it lighter & ur profile's right in ways...cuz your bio is being a rider (writer) ^^stretched IMO, so kinda weak u leave the personals in the blue..for me to leave u pissin n puke this shit's like your own name..cuz you'll end up missin a W ^^nice personal I luv troublin you cuz if there's a gang for those afraid to bust,u elite n ur aim's bein real...cuz your spits cuase tons of choas n put us to sleep* ^^not too bad this site's a fiesta for hot cliques...but ur crew ain't show for the party n that crew of herbs better start that movement already..& leave RV ^^ok vanquish outta here...but in the game..u unseen at the bottom height & ur due(dew) to disappear like a wodden porch on autumn nights ^^kinda badly worded but ok concept also man, you need to work on making it flow more smoothly, a lot of your lines were too stretched vs. this guy gon talk shit like he a NATURAL i'll have his face re arrenged,call me the animal ^^nah non-witty threat i'll load my glock...step up front...and blast his head cuz this gon be the last time this nigga goes 2 bed ^^*yawn* talking about gun threats on the web - sorry man, this straight labels you a newb everytime they post who has the wackest skillz they put the blame on you. shit im lyrically gift u just paranoid..............so muthafuck wat ya gon do... ^^1st line ok, 2nd line is wack - don't question...diss! nigga u deranged.............kk yea man thats true u think you gon win but tell people stop lyin to you.. ^^weak ill demolish this fool he dissolve so quick... quicker than ur girl was SUCKIN on my DICK! ^^ wack this is a KO lyrical knockout the crowd roarin where is ur god now?!?!?!...just another MC im floorin... ^^nah, wack self glory (self glory only works if it's funny and witty) ill break this fool i was taght to never aim... so ima grab this fool beat him to death...bash his brain ^^nah, threats also only work if they're funny and witty, this is just a waste of space my be a classic ur brain took too much damage its dented you aint got no fuckin skills ur fuckin herb ur generic ur skillz is rented. ^^well at least you're dissing him here, but nothing original, so it's weak. no hate, you're just new that's all, battle some easier people to elevate first deranged wins easily |
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Voted For: Deranged
good open cuzzo {u a pussy...a puppy with his tail between his leg,house or in street this dude's shook at me..in front me..on his knees...beggin for no beef^^} and u were nice the whole way thoo...good shit main. Thoo I dont like tha way u ended it |
man whatever i know fasho i aint no herb you fuckin lil shits hahaha
lookin all hard shit u just joined... uppin........ |
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Voted For: Deranged
shodown verse this guy gon talk shit like he a NATURAL i'll have his face re arrenged,call me the animal ^ meh opener wordplay on his name but self-g kinda i'll load my glock...step up front...and blast his head cuz this gon be the last time this nigga goes 2 bed ^ not feelin it not a punch...meh bar everytime they post who has the wackest skillz they put the blame on you. shit im lyrically gift u just paranoid..............so muthafuck wat ya gon do... ^ na not feelin again...too self glorified nigga u deranged.............kk yea man thats true u think you gon win but tell people stop lyin to you.. ^ hmm again needs work IMO ill demolish this fool he dissolve so quick... quicker than ur girl was SUCKIN on my DICK! ^ played...na...to me that says you prematurely cum...shoulda thought that bar out better this is a KO lyrical knockout the crowd roarin where is ur god now?!?!?!...just another MC im floorin... ^ meh...more self-glory ill break this fool i was taght to never aim... so ima grab this fool beat him to death...bash his brain ^ na again not feeling punch/diss isn't strong at all my be a classic ur brain took too much damage its dented you aint got no fuckin skills ur fuckin herb ur generic ur skillz is rented. ^ OMG...finally he drops an aight bar...more like that...i'm not saying it's great but thats the approach you need in these battles derranged verse Quote:
u a pussy...a puppy with his tail between his leg,house or in street this dude's shook at me..in front me..on his knees...beggin for no beef^^ ^ quote helped this personal hit...good researching retarded MC's startin to bleed from when I stab ur neck n turn it blue and ur mind's phased..cuz in ur profile....you still reppin 2 crews ^ aight bar i guess he ain't in a crew no more lol and to top it off...you a faggot..eatin cocks n tastin..what is this? tied up with more buea's(bows) than Playstation's at christmas ^ aight bar ok punch good diss i ain't steppin to you..u already squashed up..n seein it lighter & ur profile's right in ways...cuz your bio is being a rider (writer) ^ ok personal... u leave the personals in the blue..for me to leave u pissin n puke this shit's like your own name..cuz you'll end up missin a W ^ W&L bars are kinda played but aight i guess I luv troublin you cuz if there's a gang for those afraid to bust,u elite n ur aim's bein real...cuz your spits cuase tons of choas n put us to sleep* ^ not feelin this bar this site's a fiesta for hot cliques...but ur crew ain't show for the party n that crew of herbs better start that movement already..& leave RV ^ meh ok i guess vanquish outta here...but in the game..u unseen at the bottom height & ur due(dew) to disappear like a wodden porch on autumn nights ^ nice closer good bar Overall shodown...work on it is all i can say ya text flow was aight...but everything else was extremely meh about it only your closer was considered a reasonabley good diss but other than that i think u'd only win if this was a self-glorification match...coz you had mad amounts of that in your verse. Derranged aight verse 1st time peeping you u's ok...you're deffo more elevated than sho but you could still do wit some work...keep it up though both V/Derranged...shodown...keep droppin though u'll elevate wit time |
Voted For: Deranged
both verses wereight but derangeswas betta he had him in every category so this vote goes to deranged |
thx......uppin for one more vote..................
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c'mon....uppin for that one more vote.............
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uppin man WERD
deranged keep it c'mon man WERD!!!! hahahaha congrats you gave me my 10th lose man WERD!!!!!!!! |
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Voted For: Deranged
Showdown- Dude your shit didn’t make sense at all, hard to read and shit it was like my sister was typing it … No offense I don’t know either of you or anything could have been done a lot better, Flow wordplay personals everything keep elevating Deranged- I liked your verse it was pretty decent for a spit, Good wordplay and all, easy to read made sense ok personals nothing too much and flow was alright… Could have been better, overall you did ok enough to stretch it out and take the win V/Deranged RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=207681 |
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