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Voted For: Mimesis

memisis- punches are solid,especially the box/house line. I felt that hit hard.
Opener is good. closure is solid.
You have alot more punches, that hit harder than deranged.

deranged. the use of that qoute didnt work to well for you, not sure..just doesnt seem to fit in.
Your opunches are weak, only good punch was the play on his name but you still didnt use it in a creative way.
opener is the qoute lines, didnt like them personally. Closure didnt hit hard at all.

Voted For: Mimesis

You're gonna die son.. I would beat you down, and just peck your bones
But I just say we slap box.. well nah,
..I don't want to wreck your home
I'ma pound your face.. done with that shit, i dont care what you say son
Cause anymore name dropping with you.. I'd be on the list for gay clubs
Say what? Yeah, nobody's picking you to win.. but now.. just watch this
When I was talking about feeling D.. I was just talking about your mom's tits
All you do is talk shit.. but you're fucking wack, now you're going to hell, why?
Cause I'm bringing the axe to this battle.. but it's not so I can smell nice

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no one's shakin in they boots cuz there's no suspence..I ended this
Rv's infected with whackness..but u show why..hence the 'memisis'*
kick u inside n lash cuz your user titles trash...you in front of the line to rot
and yea...you ARE cool....
but that's only cuz ya rhymes ain't hot**


im thinking mimesis didnt go as hard as he could
didnt like the way you rhymed some of ya bars, out of character, but still had those^^that i like, dugg the closer alot

d came good.....im not sure i read you b4 unless im too dumb to know ur alias (probably)
but those were the bars i liked from urs....
u had personals but they didnt connect as hard as they couldve
the 9th degree one wasnt worded good
the smart one lacked hit power, and the hensley
one wasnt really a strong punch
BUT still nicely done


this was close but in the end i gotta say
honestly mim still took it
d was probably one re worded bar from the win
dont hate me
honest opinion

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