yea man...........but ay!!! stfu young u talk madd shyt 2.......dis was like ma first battle so stfu i signed up awhile ago..........so im tryin 2 finish n imma lay back 4 a while n u gotta stop hating 1

Voted For: Bone Collector

Structure-Tha Notorious D, had pretty much the better structure felt i could flow to his a lot better.bone collector your structure was hard to follow, felt i couldnt flow to it as well

Multis-Neither had any apparent multis that i could see.Both need to up on that to complex your verse more.

Vocab-Again neither had any vocab that was presentable, felt both verses were below the average on that, up on that to enhance your verse.

punches-I feel bone collector had the better punches, they were original and they had good wordplay and creativity to them.As for tha notorious d you sorta complimetented him in the first line.....and whats wrong wit white girls? my girls white....dont see much of a good punch there.

personals-Clear to see bone collector racks up this catergorie, simply for the fact that they were presentable un like tha notorious d...up on ur verse period lol

originality-Both were pretty original not the best battle ive seen eh, id say v/bone collector

thanx man uppin for more votes

uppin 4 dis bytch!!!

Voted For: Bone Collector

Dude Comeon Be Serious The Reasin You
.................................2-0 Is Cuz U Battle Nice Guys
Thats Easy Like Goin To Beverly Hills And Doin
.................................................. .............drive Bies
^^ight,nice attempt at a punch but wasnt feelin it too much,iight opener

Im A End U Like General In Street Fighters
Cuz Youd Be 0-2 If It Wasnt For Dickriders
^^im feelin the flow and i like tha 2nd line...nice

I Guess The Only Times He Spits First
..........................is When Hes Playing Truth Or Dare
Cuz When He Facs Me He Dosent Even Stare
^^wasnt feelin it too much...kinda creative tho

You Little Pussy Was Scared To Accept
Ur Wack Like When Scobey Goes For Afg Attemp
^^^2nd line stretched a little too much but iw as feelin it...nice

Im Ending You Like N.o Homesthat Happens When You
Face The Bone
^^^i dont understand why thatz there but iight


Yo catch me in the street, poppin that bullshit
Catch a fat lip, hoes all over your shit
^^wouldnt he want to have hoes?..not feelin it...pretty wack opener

My house of reresentatives stay starvin, beats thumpin
You get wyt bytches but ur not the 1 dumping
^^again,not feelin it...played

Im unholy, cause there ain't a part missin
and i catch u in da club on the floor with a heart missin
^^no punch,self glorification,and you rymed missin wit missin

my point is that u a bitch aint no one gone respect ya
nigga not even the real bonecollector would accept ya
^^wack punch,elementary school bar,and once again you rymed tha same words

this your first battle and your rhymes are tiring
your pathetic.......go get a job.....i think dunkin donuts is hiring
^^first line was pretty good,i was feelin it,but that 2nd line killed you with that bar...played out and wack

iight,bonecollecter definatley got this one...tha notorious d,i see that u are elevated from b4,but keep at it and i respect that your battlin again...NO HATE!!!

v/bonecollecter

thanx upp#6........

uppin fo my homiez battle!!!!!.....they need votez

Voted For: Bone Collector

Yo catch me in the street, poppin that bullshit
Catch a fat lip, hoes all over your shit
1...no punch watsoeva...just threats
My house of reresentatives stay starvin, beats thumpin
You get wyt bytches but ur not the 1 dumping
2...whack.
Im unholy, cause there ain't a part missin
and i catch u in da club on the floor with a heart missin
1...again...no punch...just threats
my point is that u a bitch aint no one gone respect ya
nigga not even the real bonecollector would accept ya
3....wuz a decent concept..coulda been something with some wording
this your first battle and your rhymes are tiring
your pathetic.......go get a job.....i think dunkin donuts is hiring
2....whack

Dude Comeon Be Serious The Reasin You
.................................2-0 Is Cuz U Battle Nice Guys
Thats Easy Like Goin To Beverly Hills And Doin
.................................................. .............drive Bies
2....weak
Im A End U Like General In Street Fighters
Cuz Youd Be 0-2 If It Wasnt For Dickriders
4...meh...decent i guess
I Guess The Only Times He Spits First
..........................is When Hes Playing Truth Or Dare
Cuz When He Facs Me He Dosent Even Stare
2...not much of a punch
You Little Pussy Was Scared To Accept
Ur Wack Like When Scobey Goes For Afg Attemp
4...ok
Im Ending You Like N.o Homesthat Happens When You Face The Bone


OK...this wuz easy.The win goes to bone collector for actually haveing a battle verse
MY advice to both of you...is to stop with the threats.Just diss the oppenent.And nothing more.

Vote-Bone Collector

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Voted For: Bone Collector

you are wack man...how you a mod?

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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

hey you d you got this for better flow and structure cause both of yall came weak with the flow

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dam ya'll gotta fukyn use better votes cuz yall aint explaining shit....

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come on man ILL RTF.............

Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

natorious had this...its was like wut a easy batlle but both verse was wack...
good battle


im up for any votes.....plz go to my battles

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