Its you or drakel anyway, i read it in a thread in TE.

Good Battle Daubs..........................................

Voted For: hotshh!

hotshh!:
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
Decent opener, the setup was actually better than the punch IMO, the whole "slept on" conept, although a tad played, could've been worded better.
22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
Aight punch here, was feeling this somewhat.
LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
Lol good shit, haven't seen this concept before.
"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
Decent, not the best follow-up to your previous bar.
Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
Decent punch here, wordplay was meh.
Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
Personal was lacking here.

Not the best I've seen from hot, actually not really comparable to the good shit I've seen him drop.

Daubs:
Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
Was feeling the setup, but the punch was subpar. It could've been worded better and been dope.
Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
Aight personal here
Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
Lol was feeling this.
Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
Decent, I liked the concept but felt the whole bar just could've been formed better.
hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
Blah
I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
[b]Weak closer, not as good as it could've been.

Daubs, your verse had potential, but the wording on your concepts wasn't the greatest. That was your downfall here.

Both didn't drop too great IMO, so this battle was close...the unenjoyable type of close. However, hotshh! dropped just somewhat of a better verse.

V//hotssh!, and RTF @ the link in my sig or I'll eat your siblings.

never a KO.

Up.................................

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Obviously it's Drakel then.

Don't ever call me a hater..:(

I wont, i :love: you souly :cool:.................

Voted For: hotshh!

Good Battle

Hotshh! - your verse had really good wordplay. good punches throughout. i liked the campfire line the best. your opener was kinda played though. your closer was basic but still good. that loose leaf line was lame. i woulda liked to see some more personals in this verse but it was still solid. 8/10


Daubs - I was disappointed by your verse. I have seen you come with better verses. Your opener wasnt very good at all. it actually kinda sucked for an opener. the blister line was pretty funny though. you had few decent to good punches. the arse line also made me laugh. but the wordplay in some of them was real basic. overall i would give your verse a 7