This was feedback posted for MC Firetruck
 

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lol the funniest thing is i didnt' ask for any votes...like he problay did......all these people who voted for me i dont know..and never heard of sept like Yvonne..and i thought she hated me worse then Soul Rebels fake ass....neways
uppin

Lol @ how every time I merk a bitch she accuses me of asking for votes.

Voted For: MC Firetruck

mc firetruck obviously got this.. even tho some of his punches were played.. i would expect more from a respected veteran like you.. but.. meh you did what it took to win this battle.. with some gangsta personals.. and hard hitting punches.. as to were i didnt even wanna read jroy's just cause his structure.. shits annoying and ur punches werent hitting hard roy.. soo i'd set up ur punches better and have some more personals soo no hate to Jroy just dropping an honest.. RTF on Battle in my sig..

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Word I will soon yo. More ppl need 2 fukkin vote yo!

Voted For: MC Firetruck

MC Firetruck - Good spit dawg, your punches were sick, wordplay was niice, and it flowed well.

Best Line - I put out the hottest MC's, so u wont be hard for me to kill
'Cuz u so gassed I'm surprised RV don't have a heating bill

Worst Line - NONE

JROY - I didnt like your structure, it flowed ok, some iight wordplay and ok punches.

Best Line - I'll Take This Ingrade And 'Tuck His Ass' In Like 'Gay Pride Attractions'//
His Status Does 'Add Up' Like 'Odd Numbers In Fractions!'//

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - This was a pretty close battle but I felt that MC, came with stronger punches and personals. He flowed well, JRoy, work on structure kid, and step up on the punches.

Vote - MC

RTF in Sig of Vote be REMOVED!

Voted For: MC Firetruck

Voted 4: MC Firetruck

MC Firetruck

Best Line: I burn ya, really what makes you think you rhyme dude?
Even if you did spit flames...your sig would still outshine you!

Worst Line: I'm leavin' y'all, he's got no heart I'm rippin' his chest
Continuous shots at J, too bad he always hittin' the bench

JRoy

Best Line: Thinkin U The Best? U Just Betta 'Swallow That Shyt'//
U Couldnt Get A 'Leg Up' On Me At A 'Sneaker Store' 'Modelin Kicks'//

Worst Line: With All Them Wack Personals, I Should 'Crack Your Spine As I Speak'//
The Only Props You'll Ever Be Gettin Is 'Punchlines Of The Weak'//

Overall...MC's was more tight..flowed through...till the end

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