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Terumoto 09-20-05 04:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Implicit
Ayo OMB wanna make a beat for me? Just straight beatbox. Nothing in particular just something that i can flow to. I'm serious too.


lol. you're the second person today...

but sure. Hit me up on msn or aim and let me know what kind of beat you want and shit.

my sn and email should be around somewhere

Know-Gimix 09-20-05 04:03 AM

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Originally Posted by One Man Band
Man, I dont mean to offend you or anything, but your writing style is real flawed. Plot is generic, not much creativity in naming... Well there is, but the names arent very good. The way you use your words just doesnt sound very professional. I've had to mark 15 year old kid's narratives, and some were better than this.

I dont really know though cos I just read that first chapter.



see, i just got finished reading the first chapter, and while there were some spotty lines, I liked the names, and story enough to want to read more of the book... it kind of reminded me of ender's game, only in a completely different setting.

Know-Gimix 09-20-05 04:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Implicit
Chingy? Dope? AAAhhh!!! What is this world coming to?



sarcasm guy...(Does the Carlos Mencia der de der)

Status 09-20-05 04:07 AM

im fucking bored..im fucking bord.im about to go to sleep

so im gfonna keep posting that ^^^

Terumoto 09-20-05 04:23 AM

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Originally Posted by SevenThird
see, i just got finished reading the first chapter, and while there were some spotty lines, I liked the names, and story enough to want to read more of the book... it kind of reminded me of ender's game, only in a completely different setting.


Yeah maybe I was a bit harsh... But those spotty lines shouldnt even be there.

The writer of the best selling book ever got her shit rejected by a fair few publishers before one accepted it. That was harry potter that got rejected. So this publisher musnt be very good.

Im not necessarily saying the shit is bad, it just needs to be revised.

La Cosa Nostra 09-20-05 06:02 AM

I could say something that would be really mean and degrading..

But meh... I'll be nice for once..

MC Virtuoso 09-20-05 06:22 AM

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Originally Posted by anxiety
:nono:

And your a writer?!?!

lol he's gonna have a busy editor..

but yeh congrats

New Meth0d 09-20-05 06:52 AM

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Originally Posted by SevenThird
see, i just got finished reading the first chapter, and while there were some spotty lines, I liked the names, and story enough to want to read more of the book... it kind of reminded me of ender's game, only in a completely different setting.

enders game was dope!

Mad Dog 09-20-05 07:27 AM

Fuck this

Salt Beef > Publishing Deals

Grave Digger 09-20-05 05:30 PM

lmfaooo, ok, the internet, a real publisher, lmfaoooo. stfu.

I meant a REAL publisher, dumb fuck.

Crazy Hades 09-20-05 05:35 PM

I'm getting a site for me and LE, a domain .com name. We gonna publish some poetry books, word...and I write hellabetta then him!

Grave Digger 09-20-05 05:36 PM

But you both suck.

-_-

L.E 09-20-05 06:32 PM

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Originally Posted by Jack The Ripper
lmfaooo, ok, the internet, a real publisher, lmfaoooo. stfu.

I meant a REAL publisher, dumb fuck.


I officially label you the dumbest man alive.

It IS a real publisher...a division of RANDOM HOUSE. THE BIGGEST BOOK PUBLISHER IN THE WORLD.

Fuck sakes...people are retarted.

∆ P E X X 09-21-05 12:13 AM

My real question is why are you competing with record deals?

Grave Digger 09-21-05 12:15 AM

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Originally Posted by Limited Edition
I officially label you the dumbest man alive.

It IS a real publisher...a division of RANDOM HOUSE. THE BIGGEST BOOK PUBLISHER IN THE WORLD.

Fuck sakes...people are retarted.


But your book still sucked. And you'll make like, 500$ if your lucky, congrats.


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