nice dubs:)
lol your flow is sick as fuck!, i love your voice, i used to be like hmm she gonna be a good artists some day, but i think your startin to grasp that now. your lyrics are dope fa sho, nice connects between lines and a nice emotion. i like the beat lil loop kinda beat could really throw some brain damaging lyrics on, and well you did that.

props o and thanks again wit the help...1

Yo girl i can tell you definitely elevated. Keep it up. I was waiting for more on this track you cut me short, I need another minute of fiya........lol. good shit keep it up. layered vocals sounded nice.

that shit was tight ya flow was good....the beat was raw but ya quality needs some work but other that that its a hot track.......keep this shit up ma..8/10

good shyt fiya...

definitely a difference between this and ya older shyt... the beat was cool but lacked bass... bass it up and add that gutter feel to it... make it sound more spooky like mobb deep did on that joint with lil kim... ya vocals was aiighth... some parts of ya verse sounded a lil off the beat but not by much... should be an easy fix... liked when ya sped ya verse up... shoulda added more of that in there...

ayo... i'm giving you ya props now cuz i ain't sure if i'll be facing you in the crew battle...lol... you still my homie and all but crew battles are a totally different story... i'll come give you a hug and a shout out afterwards... it's only business... never personal... one...lol

this shit was hot foreal.....your flow was cool and your dubz was cool lyrics was good.....gud job ma word

This track sucked.Fuck Fiya.

^LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haaaaa *DIED* thanx for the up.

No..seriously..ur shit sucked.

All I heard "liqour..guns..bacardi...cups..clubs..blah-blah-blah..and even more"

COs really...all this club banging shit is PLAYED AS FUCK.If I wanted to hear something like this I woulda turned on the radio.I don't wanna hear that garabge.Ur subject matter is ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. :bored: Cause everyone hates on the mainstream for their redunant techniques...yet you do the same shit...and guess wat?...you get posts like this \/\/\/




Fukin pathetic.

And also...go get urself a new style.Instead of biting other people's one.

And based on that post u made up there ^^...it seems to me u actually think ur shit's nice...ha..

get ur head out ur own ass bitch

And I don't care if you got a bunch of d/r's that gonna give u credit when ur shit suked....I won't.

MY advice...you are a bitch..that is all..accept the fact that u are a bitch.And stop rapping.Bitches have no place in rap.Just suck dick and end it.

Ok bitch?

I didn't talk about guns or cups.. lmfao what are you listening to. Uhm no Bikini, for the last time, I'm not the club track type this a once in a life time type thing.

And that's not the only good comment I got. I'm not getting hyped of that. I'm actually looking for the bad comments so I can keep working at elevating. But had you not notice. And if you were listening at least a little bit, you'd know that I had wordplay not the forced kind like your text battle vs. Mim. :thumbup:

Keep upping this, it don't make a difference for me.

iite listenin, quality good......likin the end bit when you go fast but u gotta do much more....likin the flow, lyrics basic...keep shit up, please can you rtf and be different from loads of these cats that dont :(,

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210125

Thanks ma

U were talking about guns 'n cups.I heard magnums and automatic and bacardi,driping,ice.. and all that other blah-blah mainstream shit in there.

Once in a lifetime thing?...RRRIIIIGGGGGGHHHHHTTTT

And in case u don't know...wordplay in audio is useless....ESSPECCIALLY if your rapping fast.Audio is made for more direct 'n laconic shit.
And u bring up the Mimesis battle again.....why don't YOU battle me so you don't have to keep bringing up my previous ones?

you obviously didnt listen cos i heard none of that your talkin bout natural... u are fuckin retarded

and before you try call sum1 wack at audio

atleast make sure your atleast half decent at text or atleast have made attempts to make audio yourself

why are YOU talking for her?

U were telling me I have no life in that other thread..yet..u decide to follow me wherever the fuck I go?

I didn't SAY "gun" and "cups" and "ice" the fuck.... Automatic is not referring to the gun you idiot. The track is CALLED TIP THE BOTTLE UP... it's called stickin to the topic, dumbass.

Wordplay in audio is only useless to those who don't know how to listen. If you don't understand, then refrain from listening. It's a lesson you should learn. Set the battle up audio. LOL @ you saying what audio is made for.