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-   -   Sin`cere vs chip (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209373)

AssasSINation 10-12-05 01:44 PM
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AssasSINation 10-13-05 07:40 AM
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AssasSINation 10-13-05 04:36 PM
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AssasSINation 10-13-05 10:23 PM
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chip 10-15-05 06:56 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mystic Chaos
Voted For: Sin`cere

v/sin'cere

sin'cere-your verse was pretty dope man, short but sweet...you had good flow...good structure...i feel your vocab was hott and intact...your topic was hard to keep track of...didnt really know what u were trying to do...but i feel you kept emotion tight..and everything in control. overall 8/10

chip-Your verse was hard to follow, first off ur verse was poorly structured...couldnt flow well at all..ur vocab wasnt much special but nothing to knock you on...i dont knwo if this was poetry or wut..but u had god emotion...and iight imagery..but nothing special.......u need to elevate a bit...but overall 6/10

v/sin'cere
rtf on one of my battles in 48 hours or this vote WILL be disqualified


haaa..... it was poetry....... i assumed we weren't gonna have a battle about love........ oh well, uppin for more votes...........

AssasSINation 10-15-05 06:52 PM
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chip 10-16-05 10:58 AM
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Critic 10-21-05 08:11 AM
Voted For: Sin`cere

Chip ~ Your verse was alright the emoitions was deep
but about from that I didnt feel u brought much to this
battle. Everything else was simply alright !! no hate !!

Sin ~ Come sic in this battle,.. Flow well dope the first
two bars smashed it... Vocab was ill, emotions well nice
I liked the morals of the verse.

Easy win for sin !!

Stay up both

1~

chip 10-21-05 09:23 AM
^not really sure i'm feelin that explanation...... plz don't judge my piece by the rhyme scheme, bcuz i wasn't even trying to rhyme, i just did at times out of habit...... this flows more like a spoken word....... bcuz that's basically what it iz..... uppin for more votes, but i ask all voters from now on NOT TO VOTE UNLESS U GET WHAT I WAS TRYING TO DO with my piece....... if i lose a battle, i want it to be a good loss..... not a oh, his verse was hot and yours was not....... just explain to me how u would've changed it...... uppin 4 more votes.....

Critic 10-23-05 11:30 AM
I aint judging you piece ! and from what I can see the other person who voted
on this battle said practicly the same thing.

I thought this was a topical battle ? Spoken Word is more poetry ? if this was
a Open Mic then maybe I would have looked at your verse in a different light
but your verse wasn't a topical and I'm sure most people will agree. So if I was
to judge this verse as a topical i'm sorry but it's not very good.


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