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yo NK, if I lose this we'll have a rematch :slick:
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if u lose this face me......................and NK too
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This was feedback posted for One Man Band
werd @ OMB not giving one ounce of effort and care in this battle.
Last bar owns. |
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No doubt.......................................... :shoot: to both you and hotshh! :thumbup: |
uppin this shit to the top........................
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Voted For: One Man Band
i have to go with OMB here....his multies were clean, unforced, well sequenced....enjoyable.....dont know why NK still using hypens to separate your multies in a multi battle....:sigh: word, v/OMB |
^^why the fuck does hypens matter?......and I only did it in 3 bars.....
aah....uppin. |
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Voted For: One Man Band
Mhmm... See I recon you both needed to cram in more multis in this.. Natural killa, when writing for a multi battle switching up multis inbetween lines is a bad move, cause you'll be working one rhyme but at the end of ya line when it switches up you kind of lose the sequence.. OMB I def seen you come much harder with multis than this before.. But you got him in your last few bars, although you lost the meaning within em, you were able to put together some fairly decent 4 syllable strings. Bottom line, I think you both could of tightened it up and done better, but OMB won it off his last few bars.. |
This was feedback posted for One Man Band
pollz.............................................
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uppin for more votes..............................
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uppin this fucking shit...........................
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