listening through some better than average speakers.

I HATE remixes to mainstream tracks that liek this.

The first verse sounds a little flat as far as the dliv goes. The emotion is liek a full mood more mellow than the tope of the song and the vocalist sounded nasal with mild sound quality. The verse's lyrics were consistant with the hook and so on, but the deliv didn't math the meotion of the song.

The second verse has worse sound quality than the first. It sounds like a kareoke machine in a shower and I can hear mad static til I hear em lean in and shut the mic down. Lyrics were solid and the ender was real nice. just needed a smack more emotion IMO.

Third verse, has the most emotion so far, tho I didn't liek the emphasis on the rhymescheme. Sounds like "bligh bleh bleh bligh" and I personally can't stand that. The sound quality in it is muffled, just loud. Sounds like a sock over a mic. Lyrics were good, but this and the other three verses could have used some soft adlibs to make the verses pop because they're all relatively the same. From a marketing perspective, you guys made a mistake in all sounding liek the same artist with differnet voices. All the lyrics sounded the same and the message was the same on all three verses which would have been good, except that it lacked variety or other imagery and/or subject matter in the same overall message which made them seem "identical" instead of "similar". If one person took credit for all three verses it wouldn't surprise me personally - and that's how close they sound. Um..think that's about it. 1

Sounds liek someoen put osme reverb on the instrumental because it's got a whole lotta reverb on the vocals that I don't remember hearing in the past, but it's not a big deal.

^^thanx for the feed dooms

my quality do sound bad, for some reason its been getting better and better each track though, so weerd..
and we'll take that similar sounding thing into consideration.

yea props for feed dooms... uppp

put that shit up for d/l !!!!!!!

just sickness...

iite listeningg.......one of my favourite tracks...decree dawg quality not great, turn down the vocals slightly, lyrics pretty nice, flow edgye, choppy and no emotion, but keep at it, likin the M A S in the back around, the 2nd guy tizzle, came in good, quality ok, vocal volume fine, lyrics basic, flow fell off at one point a lil but came back up, iite waitin for Spul, aint talked to you for time huh, aiite peepin, likin the watchu want huh lol, come in pretty good, reminscent of a triple N flow, but emotional gotta be better, flow was great didnt fall off, my brown friend holdin it down!!!!..lol plz rtf to this:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210349

^lol haha word.... thanks to both of y'all... and int I got you dawg, jus gotta wait till I get on my computer. on my moms right now. but thanjks. upp

IIte kl dawg...thanks...you shud put ure tracks up for download im lovin the tell me and the anthem

not bad this was mixed real well...Decree and spul stood on beat best..tizzle yo verse seemed alil too simple but still none the less this is a decent track mixin made it sounds better then what it was good job on that imma give you a 8/10 iight holla 1ne...

P.s. im postin up some fire in a bit so make sure to peep that Ez 1ne...

^Fa shos........=1=....

weeeeeeeerd, thanx for feed :shoot:

LOL @ all yall songs about the ladies....

first dude....

quality is ok...flow is ok...it could be touched up a lil bit...but its decent...delivery n presence is coo.....i think you could maybe mellow out a lil bit more

2nd dude....

flow is coo....delivery is coo.....quality is ok....u laid back a lil more....this was a decent verse....not too bad....


3rd dude...

i think you came the nicest here.....lyrically u had some coo lines....flow was good...presence n delivery was there.........nice verse....



overall this was a coo track........keep it up...

Decree n Spul.....RTF......Tizzle already did lol....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210373