Voted For: Mystic Chaos

aiight MC got this batle

Not-aiight but you lack in hard hitting punches.....you need to work on incuring multi's in your verse to help with flow.....also...add some personals that diss the person to make your verse more effective....and dont space out your lines....just you need to elevate and work on punches...

MC-aiight good flow....your punches were harder hitting.....you incorprated personals..you need to work on flow though....add some multi's.......also you need to up your vocab as well.....but you came harder and had more punches landed....

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

This Is What I Think

Flow- Goes To Mystic His ryme Flow was Ten Times Better Put Together Than Notorious d and he worded His lines better

Punchez- Goes To Mystic also For Puttin a More Intellectuall Punch of Originality into his verse and comin out on top overall

Personalz- Goes to as we Know Mystic Bcuz really he supplied the only real personal in this battle that was worthe noticing

Multiez- This Category Stays empty Bcuz I Did Not See any Multies from either of you :( I Am So Disapointed

Vocab- Goes to TNd he did sort of use the high type of vocab his verse But not That much better than Mystic di so it was a close area

Originality- Goes to Mystic for being more of course original ....I tink that his concept is a whole lot better and more unseen that Ntd so Yea I Give that to him

Overall I Give this battle vote to Mystic for as you can see in my breakdown for having the better verse overall

Please RTF In mY battle link in my Sig in 48 Hrs or less

This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 

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