Voted For: wyteknyte

I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap-
When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab//
3...choppy rhyming...weak punch.
HIV is the only thing about you that's positive
Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive//
2..not serious here...seems ur just relying on big vocab.
Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see
But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me//
2...weak.
I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame
Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game//
2...no......maybe if you worded this better..then it could have been something.
I could see your future and it aint no record labels
A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables
nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables//
3...weak...

Dawg you battle newbies religiously,im given you a beatin
Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin
4....decent enuff i guess...
I stop and laugh ,you throwing a punch is hard to see
On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me
3....eh...kinda played as a concept....
Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb
Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb
2...no...these aren't punches...just threats..and that's a no.
Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race
Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace
4...decent...

ok..one-sided
Notorious...
Try to stop puttin this(//) at the end of ur lines.It makes ur shit look herbish.I felt at times,like ur 2nd bar,you tried to rely on big vocab alone.And that's a no.You were too basic as well.Don't just state shit.....
Wyteknyte....
try to avoid puttin links in battles...it's considered played.People hate to click on those.But still...I think ya won for actually having some decent bars...

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