Voted For: flow verse

punches:flow
wordplay:flow
structure: notorious
personals: niether

winner:flow

explination:
ok to really breakdown the above reasons, this is how i saw it.
flow was on point against D with the punches and wordplay, i feel the phd line was a valuble line to his win, the roof line was ok but not to special, a little played too but it had what needed to winn in this battle, the flow was good but choppy in spots as for notorious he had his bars structured right but failed to come strong with wordplay and punches and it takes those to winn a battle, structure alone cant do it so in my result i go with flow verse as the winner of this battle do to better word play and punches, thats my vote 1

uppin 4 dis bych..........uppin uppin uppin uppin...

uppping i thought 3-0 ment k.o but for sme reason i still need votes

still upping even though i already won....someone vote

isn't 3-0 knockout then why is this battle still up?

Voted For: flow verse

notorius no personals put all of ur liknes together you need to work on the coabs in ur rhyme scheme didnt really feel any of ur lines to be honest elevate

better vocab and wordplay you didnt have any personals either so meh however i was felling ur fucking on the roof line and thats about it work on personals not a bad battle

rtf explained honest votes on these battles or i will dq my vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210496
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210494

upping cause i still need one more vote

Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

Vocab- Notorious
Flow- Notorious
Structure- Notorious

Aiight, here my explenations.

"I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew
I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo"

Vs.

"Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut
This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up"

Honestly, Notorious had better vocab that made it sick. I didnt really notice anything that stuck out in Flow. Other than tha line i posted up. Notorious's shit stuck out like "whoa" Good battle 2 each. Notorious has my vote.

Voted For: flow verse

Flow verse

Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell
Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell”
Concept had potential.. worded wrong..
Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth
By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof
Decent..
He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact
If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack”
Nah..
Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut
This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up
Not a punch..

ThA NoToRiOuS D

My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime
Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme
Nah..
I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew
I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo
Decent..
My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe
My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu
Not a punch..
I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush
Hitting you and your town like a bum rush
Nah..
And flow verse whats going on through your mind?
Too late, you're falling too far behind
Not a punch..

Overall, Flow verse came with one decent line.. one concept that had potential, and two lines that weren't that good. Tha Notorious D had one decent line and the rest weren't that good. Flow verse just had the better overall verse. He had better concepts, attempted more wordplay (he also had better wordplay) and more connecting punches. So, in conclusion, Flow verse gets my vote for the better overall verse.

Vote - flow verse

Both of you should join the Punchline League.