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Hey, since I voted honestly on this battle do you guys think you could vote on this?

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=213318

Thanks.

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Voted For: Micsachek

My vote: Micsachek

Punches - Micsachek. Better n were funny
Multies - None
Personals - None - One Mics was really childish shit.
Metas - Micsachek
Wordplay - None
Structure - Both Sucked.

Weak battle.

ight, thanx for votin, but that was a shit explanation lol. uppin this......

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Voted For: Micsachek

yo yo, im hot on the mic, you's a newb, yer you hurd it
you picked that avatar, cuz your mind is deranged from my cursin'
ok...
when it comes to spittin dope lines, man, you really bore me
you diggin yourself into a hole, but this aint a fictional story*
gettin there
your unequipped for battlin you aint ready for action
you gon' learn your skills from me like i was Samuel Jackson*
ok...not really hittin
lyrically rampant, keepin my game tite
how you gonna succeed in rap, when you cant even spell ya name right!*
haha ok


breakdown-this was a sub-par performance...punches were there but not hittin...personals were there but it seemed like they were thrown by a 11 year ol girl...all you need to work on is your delievery of punches





MICSACHEK
one mic is dyslexic, he could put my verse up to a mirror and still not read my lyrics/
this kid is like a deaf cancer patient, hes just dying to hear it/
haha nice
you not ready, i suggest you take it from step one/
you couldnt make "a-cut" even if you were edward sissor hands step son/
ok
one put his verse on the heater just to get his "mic-hot"/
i garrentee i will sweep this battle just like the chicago white sox/
ok...not really hittin
dawg im hurt you, you couldnt win this battle if text rappin was your virtue/
to much filler to search thru, this gonna be worst then when "john c." murked you/
ok personal
you could stay on point but your raps will never be personal/
i will turn you inside out like body was reversible/
ok
i dont know why you you try, we can see your nothing/
one mic raps like he's attached to a "e-z button"/
naw
im going to stop now so you can save your dignity/
its like im your school bully the way i take this victory/
ok...i guess


breakdown-man you really had me goin in the beginning of your verse then you started to fall off in the middle then you would pick it back up wit a hot line then start to fall back again....but you should just try in stay consistent with your personals and punches...try to incorporate more punches and word-play on his name or somethin...but it was a striahgt verse....

VOTE- MISACHEK

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