hmmm well that is an unexplained vote...so upppppppin

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

I Wasnt Feeling Para's Piece At All.
To Me It Was To Narrative Rather Then An Engadging Story.

Instead Of Tell Through His Point Of View And Putting Us There,
It Was Just Kinda More Past Tense To Be Which Really Just Didnt Apeal To Me At All.

I Think The Way It Was Written Killed The Imagery Alot.
Because You're Talking About A Stale Image,
It's Been Done, Past Tense So It's Old.
When You're Writting Something As It Happening Its Muuuuch More Effective.

For Me The Only Thing Para Had Over Myst Was Flow And Structure,
Which Really Holds No Weight In My Mind.

Myst...

Nice Piece Overall,
It Was A Much More Invovled And Creative Story.
Very Original Use Of The Storyline,
One Of Those That Makes No Sense Till The End
... Where You Just Rapped It Up Beautifully.

Only Thing I Think You Could Work On Like I Said,
Structure And Flow Cuz Para's Was Better.

Soooo Overall,
Final Vote Goes To: Mystic Choas

Uuuum Ya, Hopefully This Is Enough Of A Breakdown
... Get At Me If You Need Alittle More.