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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 

Mystic Chaos is in my crew.. I just want to check the polls..

werd, upping for ummmmmm votes...........................

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This was feedback posted for -FokusS-
 

Ckeckin Pollz............................................. ....

Voted For: -FokusS-

Couldnt run a crew right, went on hiatus to re-pent
Put my lyrical foot to ya face ill have you seein c-ment
ummm...ok
Lets be men, dawg from my verse your gettin 'wet'
My verse pisses on ya like ya was a pregnancy test
heard it before...so many times
On the real yo, ya raps is 'tired' not yet back on ya feet
Ya verse is still like nyquil, dawg puts me right to sleep
woah...there sparky...cass said somethin like this
Not yet as his peek, Sonnin this cat hes mad soft
Ya tha type ta go on a roof...........................................
........................throw ya demo just to say it dropped
dropped...soft....can't find the rhyme in that one



breakdown-i don't know but i am starting to guess about these lines that you put in here...both of those lines were used in one of cassidy's freestyles.....i ain't sayin you bitin but you need to watch ya self fa real............on a good note....your opener was the best part of your verse...everything else was played and whack




Fokus
Give him a atlas wanna hit the map but his brain is'nt in the rite state
explains y he "washed up" when he "dishes" bullshit when up to the "plate"
nice word-play son
Chaos Used to be the "Yes" man in the Movement most don't "No" this
But when "Soft Drinks" are mentioned is the only time "Mystic" is noticed
haha i see ya
His Ghost Writers write suicide notes cuz they croak when the pressure is there
But someone needs to give him a rope so he can actually hang in there
ok



breakdown-your verse was nice and complex...so it really caught my eye...had a couple punches in there...and that one personal on his name...fell off wit the finisher but the rest of the verse was strong...


VOTE-FOKUS

uping.................................

uping.....................gime sum man......it;s been 17 days i get win rite

dis battle still aint closed......................

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Mystic won this cus he had more punches and they were better and all...

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How does that nigga fokuss have two votes when it don't show anyone else votin for him?

damn u retarded...................and that vote gettin removed....smells like a newb

fokuss, p/m strobe take the win....rules is rules dawg