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TeamOne 11-15-05 09:25 PM

This was feedback posted for Jack Da Rizzle
 
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh JAck seemed to win this........

JTR 11-16-05 03:39 PM

you should have voted, god damn it...................

Germ 11-16-05 05:23 PM

Voted For: Jack Da Rizzle

word up boys, i shall vote

Dog really, we never battled before...? so just ask Y,
i mean thats the only thing that comes between how ya b(y)e,
>nah, not feeling it
n yes, i party without you, thats why im missing the joke,
think you speak with a golden flow... ?
.................. naw, thats just me pissin down ya throat,
>eh, okay
Josh's thinkin Austin's a tex-as, tryin to discredit my heat now,
but everyone seizure wacked...
..........................like an epileptic gettin a beatdown,
>almost laughed, word
yo, this wimps crap with ryhmes: i'll leave'm gaspin for days,
cuz he imp-acts with lines... but only by casting fairies in plays,
>haha, word up
so ya jack'd-a rizzle.? see, theives get smacked back a little..
get mixed in the middle,
......................you wont reign cuz now jacks-a-drizzle,....
>i like it, good finish

eh, didn't think you really came too hard, the first couple bars were kinda weak, but you did pick it up, good show

You suck on this acount & the others, so step back dick
Ya Jack Rackam acount is a pirate
...so I know you arrrrrr mitey! wack bitch
>haha, solid
Talk smack kid? You PM Spek for votes, you're gay and it's true
So fucka PM! Since I can whore you in the AM too
>word, my fav punch in the battle, haha
'Honeycomb' your hair, get a new dew, befo' I make ya plea n' cry
He's rusty as fuck, so even if this fake 'Posts' his verse
...we won't cereal lines
>good shit
I feel fine killing my friend, came to RV again? Go back and hide
& when I peeped your alias I could see ya DV8, towards RV's wack side!
>didn't really get it at first, i unno, its okay
You lack pride, get craked & die, win this battle and own the polls
Daz can't hold his own
...i'll beat Austin 316 times and leave his body stone cold
>cool

think jack had more creative, witty punches, i laughed at more lines, he kept it more consistent, word, good battle hoes

v/jack da oenhao3

JTR 11-16-05 09:19 PM

[cocky]My whole verse was a quotable[/cocky]

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JTR 11-19-05 08:13 PM

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FlowIntelligent. 11-20-05 10:05 AM

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

JDR:

You suck on this acount & the others, so step back dick
Ya Jack Rackam acount is a pirate
...so I know you arrrrrr mitey! wack bitch
^^good personal nice opener 7/10
Talk smack kid? You PM Spek for votes, you're gay and it's true
So fucka PM! Since I can whore you in the AM too
^^decent meta 5/10
'Honeycomb' your hair, get a new dew, befo' I make ya plea n' cry
He's rusty as fuck, so even if this fake 'Posts' his verse
...we won't cereal lines
^^seen something similar to the cereal meta but ok 5/10
I feel fine killing my friend, came to RV again? Go back and hide
& when I peeped your alias I could see ya DV8, towards RV's wack side!
^^ok 4/10
You lack pride, get craked & die, win this battle and own the polls
Daz can't hold his own
...i'll beat Austin 316 times and leave his body stone cold
^^good meta ok closer 6/10

Overall: 27/50 (54%)


Daz:


Dog really, we never battled before...? so just ask Y,
i mean thats the only thing that comes between how ya b(y)e,
^^ok opener decent bar 5/10
n yes, i party without you, thats why im missing the joke,
think you speak with a golden flow... ?
.................. naw, thats just me pissin down ya throat,
^^decent 5/10
Josh's thinkin Austin's a tex-as, tryin to discredit my heat now,
but everyone seizure wacked...
..........................like an epileptic gettin a beatdown,
^^dope bar 8/10
yo, this wimps crap with ryhmes: i'll leave'm gaspin for days,
cuz he imp-acts with lines... but only by casting fairies in plays,
^^another good meta 6/10
so ya jack'd-a rizzle.? see, theives get smacked back a little..
get mixed in the middle,
......................you wont reign cuz now jacks-a-drizzle,....
^^decent closer ok nameplay 4/10

Overall: 28/50 (56%)


Close battle, but i gotta go with Daz on this one


RTF with an honest vote on a battle in my sig

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-24-05 09:35 AM

thanx 4 votin flow.....n drakel, uppin 4 a couple more yo.........b

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-24-05 05:41 PM

uppin 4 more votes,will return all legit votes....werd.

L.I. 11-26-05 11:07 PM

Voted For: Jack Da Rizzle

You suck on this acount & the others, so step back dick
Ya Jack Rackam acount is a pirate
...so I know you arrrrrr mitey! wack bitch
You lack pride, get craked & die, win this battle and own the polls
Daz can't hold his own
...i'll beat Austin 316 times and leave his body stone cold

v.

Josh's thinkin Austin's a tex-as, tryin to discredit my heat now,
but everyone seizure wacked...
..........................like an epileptic gettin a beatdown

JTR just was consistant with decent punches and had more quotables. Daz was meh and didnt impress me.

L.I. 11-26-05 11:08 PM

Oh yeah... hit up this link... mad slept on!

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555

JTR 11-28-05 11:04 AM

^^ i'll hit that shit up later today, word @ daz coming back to RV

JTR 11-29-05 01:31 AM

booooooooooooooooooooooooooring.......... meh, i'm actually surprised I came back to see 2 votes though, lmfao, :)

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-29-05 08:21 AM

i kno its taking a while huh,.... when hyou get back online, get @ me on msn bro
.
.
n L.I, ill drop a vote on thas ish too later....

JTR 11-29-05 07:46 PM

oh waddup, you're online now? I'm on vacation in florida, so i'm at my dads gf sisters house, using the sisters sons computer, lmfao @ how confusing that shit sounds, anyways, I don't think I have msn on this ish, but wtv, i'll download it and uninstall it, =/

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-29-05 09:49 PM

dont botrher fam, im losing my comp tonight, this'll most likely
be my last post till dec 23,..which sux but w/e...i guess ill talk
to you then...n lmfao you being offline all the time n me not having a comp now..-_-
.
pc bro


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