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Voted For: Wicked One

Both was garbage but wicked one cus he had better punches, you both of you tied in pretty much everything else...

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This was feedback posted for Snipes
 

pollllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......................... ...

Voted For: Wicked One

Wicked One - Good verse, you flowed well had some good punches and it was overall good.

Best Line - And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid...
Actually, that’s what I just done did...

Worst Line - Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line...
And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes...

Snipes - Your flow was bad, your punches where not that good, overall weak verse.

Best Line - mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite
i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights

Worst Line - i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe
people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right

OVERALL - This battle was a one-sided battle, wicked one gets the win. He had the better flow, punches, and multi's. Snipes you need to work on your flow, and you need to be more creative with your punches.

Vote - Wicked One

RTF or Vote Be REMOVED!
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Voted For: Wicked One

personally i think this is a bit of a weak battle. heres the breadkdown:

W.O: your opener was ok, half decent punch, on target but not massively impressive.
Closer: was ok, good punch small but effective.
overall: the punches were ok but i saw a lack of creativity with metaphors and wordplay, or even amusing lines. Im sure you can and have done a lot better in the past but for now it was easily enough to take the win.

Snipes: you give us "new" peeps hope, your verse was not great, the lines were stretched -badly and the structure and flow of the verse was made really difficult because of this. The punches were incredibly weak and the rhyming and vocab was very basic. Sorry to be a killjoy but i would be very surprised if you get a single vote in this battle

rtf pls on one of my battles or il remove the vote

Done...Anyways...upppinnn......................... .

This was feedback posted for Snipes
 

pollz, dis was one weak battle.....................

No ya think i came weak fucking dumbass...I came weak because he sucked and iam still winning...anyways upppinnn...

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