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Crazy Hades 11-27-05 05:42 PM

This signifies Kool Colby's MSN.

B-MAC 11-27-05 06:34 PM

sorry man for not getting back to yah..

aight listenign.... lol@ the beat.. reminds me of that chick off Mental Funk.. lol\
anyway... Lyrics are pretty dope, but a little to high, need to be turned down, yah flow is aight for the most part, needs some work tho..quality is aight.. that also need some work.. lol.. alot of shit going on in this song.. lol.. anyway.. pretty good track hommie.. keep at it.. id rate it at 6.5/10...

KOOL COL-B 11-27-05 06:39 PM

thanx mayn, i appreciate it alot. good lookin, werd

J. Luth 11-27-05 07:15 PM

this was dope yo. your lyrics were really good. u had good emotion. flow was good, but turn down tha volume in some places. i'd rate this 7/10, overall it's a good track nah mean?

lmao @ ovie on the phone and sampling pop lotty's mom :shoot:

this shit was dope like tacos nah mean? :shoot:

word

~Tony Green~ 11-27-05 07:31 PM

aight nigga this was nice, you had good quality

emotion was there, lyrics were fire. guy at the end wassn't that bad either

sorry to hear about your parents too nigga, sad shit.

holla at me for a collab sumtime nigga!

KOOL COL-B 11-27-05 09:29 PM

thanx fo tha feed spiccaz, uppin, werd

L.E 11-27-05 10:25 PM

Listening...

Beat sounds deep...I like it...

Quality is all up and down and shit...Lyrics were cool...

The main things you are lacking is flow and delivery...flow was on beat, but it sounded choppy...and that also hurt your delivery. Delivery was cool in places, but your flow kinda messed it up...overall, just keep working on making your flow smoother.

But other than that, great track, keep it up.

Ysdat 11-27-05 11:27 PM

beats good. Flows ok. sounds good. Sound like its kind a being read, the presence could be a bit more hyped.
This is good for the rap game though.

KOOL COL-B 11-27-05 11:40 PM

thanx fo tha feed mang, werd

Jonezy© 11-28-05 10:18 AM

Not bad..quality lets you down..flow is good.but you fall off in places
lyrics nice...i dont see why ud save when quality sounds that bad..
ive only got an £8 mic and mixing it and editing a few things bring it not bad..suggest you do the same, cos i didnt listen to all this as it got annoying.

Ghost 11-30-05 07:13 PM

yo i wanna leave feed but which one am i suppose to listen to??


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