Voted For: Paranoid

This battle wasnt the best I've heard. But it was ok for both of you.

Sentence Structure - Yall both lacked in this area. Paranoid fell off a few times, and so did UNF. Yall both need to work on preparing your lines to fit your flow, or it wont sound right at all.

Delivery - Paranoid one this. His was more simple but effective, and did not sound like he strained to get his lines out. UNF struggled on riding the beat more than paranoid, which lead to a very inconsistent drop.

Punchlines - This goes back to both of your sentence structure. Paranoid got this because he delievered in almost everyline, which made up for a few that didnt hit hard. UNF, your punchlines didnt have any power behind them at all. It seemed that you was searching for something to rhyme instead of going after your opponent.

Paranoid gets my vote. His drop was more consistent. Also, both of yall need to work on emotion and quality, cause it was hard to understand some of what yall were saying.

Voted For: Paranoid



Ok this was a pretty weak battle on both sides

B.Daniel....a BIG minus for u was that if u hadn't posted ya lyrics I woulda never known without reading them...ya pronouciation is a big minus son...if u aint fully pronouncing ya words no matter how ill ya punches is...I wont know cuz I cant understand u....ya flow was choppy...an delivery lacked emotion...an ya punches was weak man...u really need to up those..this was a weak drop man...no hate I am jus being totally real

Paranoid....dun get ya hopes up, u wasn't much better..ya pronounciation was koo but ya had ya addlibs too loud so u would phase out the last few words of ya line wit those loudass addlibs....ya flow was basic an ya delivery was horrid..no emotion at all....u had weak punches as well but they were a lil less weaker...had sum borderline wittiness there...but still a subpar effort...so u get this by a hair


Nice attempts by both keep battlign an elevating both u got great potential

Unf what you got on me, I got some votes from rv's veteran audio heads.

so that shows how much better iam then you..

Wow......Its The Internet Fool

Get over It
Lmao

Only Reason Im Losin Is Cause my Pronunciation which I Have Now Cleared Up

you still suck.

..............................faggot

Sure I Do....Your Whack..

My Shits Better THan Yours

Jus Fuck Off....

you just think you are cuz of your record, you lil noob battler....I might as well consider you as a noob.

Wow I have A Record?

Who....


Gives...


A......


Fuck....??

Did I Say Shit About my Rec?NO

So Dont Even Try That One On Me


People These Days Fuckin Hell

stop trying to act mature man, your pathetic and fake.

This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
 

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Voted For: Paranoid

I think that Paranoid got this battle because i feel that Paranoid came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Paranoid got it they were used effectifely and were on point B. Daniel u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to both good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Neither...both flowed mad basically...para had a nameplay BD didn't really hit there but his rhymes was where he concentrated on most... and flow and Delivery i'll give to both.

V/tight as fuck to decide...but Para edged it in places...

B. Daniel...it's cool to rhyme like that but you gotta make sure your bars connect stuff like

Paranoid Bitch,Stress Ya Pen To Hold It Steady,
I Murk You In A Instant So Dont Say Your Ready

^ is filler...most of ya verse was filler...next time try punches personals use more...a lil wordplay...it was basic

There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly within 3 days or vote removed :thumbup: 19/12/05...deadline 10:54am 22/12/05