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Mike Macs 12-03-05 10:17 AM

It's tight but I can't really understand what your sayin, that's the only problem, and niggas gonna think you a joke when they hear, but they'll laugh when you kill some american kid on audio, makin it mo painful for him....

Adam 12-03-05 10:18 AM

It's easy to understand him man..

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 10:20 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Macs
It's tight but I can't really understand what your sayin, that's the only problem, and niggas gonna think you a joke when they hear, but they'll laugh when you kill some american kid on audio, makin it mo painful for him....

Yeah..

What can I say, I'll keep improving my vocals untill I got an exportable product..

But my first priority right now is getting to the top here in australia.

Adam 12-03-05 10:20 AM

Ontop the shouldar blades of masons
Even when this tape ends take the words I'm saying friends
Escape dense, ways to make sense become outragous

^ dopeness.

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 10:22 AM

Welcome to the business kid, let me show you the ropes
Like a broken chair under a tree with a noose choking ya throat

And

Breaking the base of ya head, drillin into ya skull
with a razor metal pole, fucking ya brain through the hole

Are my two fav bits..lol The second one is fucking brutal..

Spektikul 12-03-05 12:42 PM

Its all about Nostrailia..........................:thumbup:

M.C. Streak 12-03-05 01:16 PM

this is sick...i posted my thoughts in the song section and don't even worry about quality right now

Texxus 12-03-05 03:37 PM

its a tight freestyle or w/e....but not a song you would go around braggin about and bangin in your system while driving through your town....but its good if its a free/flow...and plus i cant stand the accents a lot of people have here....


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