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stop being lazy plez and drop a vote..............

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212893

Drop a vote in this please cos I voted in yours.

^ Already have done

Uppin for some fuckin votes.........takin ages

stop being lazy plez and drop a vote..............
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Voted For: SlicKnife

lickknife aint gonna spit the truth, you cant handle it, i know pac face down /
your simply fiction in a booth, a total contradiction like mase now / 1
^^^Ight opener
your rap storys a lie...you need cash to feel the throne /
i'll put 'money' to have the 'cal-see-'em'(calcium), so it'll be in your bones / 2
^^^played
you beat'in me? its like a sexless-whore, fucking unbelievable!, win aint even in ya rep-itoir /
out rap you? like your first gangbang you cum-4-more.. ha, like ryding your lyrics your ass-est-is-tore / 3
^^^Ight...but stretched
when it comes to battles you'll never wirte-nicer,
how did you end up in the sites-cypher? /
you not ill, you just write-hyper so the fact still remains you cant shyin-on-my-text like old highlighters / 4
^^^weak.....stretched
Your like a drunk style-list the way you always get lost in my tracks
Cuz 'gluein snails to spines' is the only way ur loadin slugs in backs /5
^^^Good
my fate is stable, but slick-knife at the corner diner waiting tables
taking soo much dick to the stomach i thought you were mating navels
^^^Weak closer

In battles Slic must wreck chances, but just check what this man plans for
…if you make Front Lines a disco…then this is murder on the dancefloor…!
^^^Good opener
Hands sore? Nah, you’re just too rexless (reckless) to EVEN pick up a win
…cause like a very small lean dwarf your chances are more little, than slim…
^^^Good punch
You’re bitter and dim, on your path to loss… just see it unravel
but how were you reppin a crew…without even completing a battle?!*
^^^nice
I’ll make you leave in a rattle, create a victim and probably a grudge too
but comparing us two? Fuck head and shoulders…my whole body is above you…!
^^^Lol nice
Rex the hopeless one so your heart will be overrun by my lines stark infests….
When you could light a fire for urgent rescue…and still not spark interest…!
^^^Played
So enjoy watching your demise when you draw your eyes to the captions…
…Till you steal from your own wolverine*… just to grab a slice of the action!
^^^Good closer

V/slicknife......he came wit a good verse that ripped rexless... he had consistent non-played punchs...he gets my vote...RTF IN THE SIG

why isnt there anybody voting? i will return the favor just leave a link one!

Vote on this

Ayo, Jae...just checked this out now, will vote on your battle if it is still open tomorrow...


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Why the fuck is this battle still open?????????????

Voted For: SlicKnife

Rexless
slickknife aint gonna spit the truth, you cant handle it, i know pac face down /
your simply fiction in a booth, a total contradiction like mase now / 1
Bad punch. And we aren't retarded, lose the numbers. Makes it harder to read.
your rap storys a lie...you need cash to feel the throne /
i'll put 'money' to have the 'cal-see-'em'(calcium), so it'll be in your bones / 2
Wordplay is bad. Punch isn't that good either.
you beat'in me? its like a sexless-whore, fucking unbelievable!, win aint even in ya rep-itoir
out rap you? like your first gangbang you cum-4-more.. ha, like ryding your lyrics your ass-est-is-tore / 3
Stretched out to hell. Punch is bad, meta is bad.
when it comes to battles you'll never wirte-nicer,
how did you end up in the sites-cypher? /
you not ill, you just write-hyper so the fact still remains you cant shyin-on-my-text like old highlighters / 4
Bad punch, and your structure is off now. So you are over the line limit.
Your like a drunk style-list the way you always get lost in my tracks
Cuz 'gluein snails to spines' is the only way ur loadin slugs in backs /5
Punch is bad. Who cares if he doesn't shoot people.
my fate is stable, but slick-knife at the corner diner waiting tables
taking soo much dick to the stomach i thought you were mating navels /6
Bad personal.

Man, his name alone should have provided some nice wordplay. You need to work on making personals, and punches that connect. Cuz right now, you are saying irrelevant stuff.

SlicKnife
In battles Slic must wreck chances, but just check what this man plans for
…if you make Front Lines a disco…then this is murder on the dancefloor…!
No punch, just self glorification.
Hands sore? Nah, you’re just too rexless (reckless) to EVEN pick up a win
…cause like a very small lean dwarf your chances are more little, than slim…
Being too specific. Messes up the meta and wordplay.
You’re bitter and dim, on your path to loss… just see it unravel
but how were you reppin a crew…without even completing a battle?!*
No punch.
I’ll make you leave in a rattle, create a victim and probably a grudge too
but comparing us two? Fuck head and shoulders…my whole body is above you…!
The only line close to ok.
Rex the hopeless one so your heart will be overrun by my lines stark infests….
When you could light a fire for urgent rescue…and still not spark interest…!
Punch is blah. But these two bars won the battle for you.
So enjoy watching your demise when you draw your eyes to the captions…
…Till you steal from your own wolverine*… just to grab a slice of the action!
Punch is weak.

You had 2 punches that blah, but those two bars were better than rexless' whole verse. Just keep writing and elevate, cuz that's the only thing I can really tell you.

Overall, both of you need to elevate, but Slic had some punches that hit a little, so he wins.
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v- SlicKnife

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still not concluded, uppin for some more votes

Uppin this battle....yet again...................................