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rexless 12-18-05 10:00 AM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
ok
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
aight
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
nah.
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
aight
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse
aight



Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
decent
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
pretty decent
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
decent
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
aight
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"...
good ending

preety much gkillaz05 won with better punches that connect better

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KempoMRK 12-19-05 07:07 AM

Voted For: Natural killa

Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
Nah, weak
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
Meh, so so
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
Nah
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
Weak concept
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"...
Nah

Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
So so
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
Ok
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
Nah
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
No
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse
Nah

Natural took this, he had that oreo bar which was ok. Rest I wasn't feeling from either.

v/ Natural Killa

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GKillaz05 12-19-05 10:21 AM

UPPIN....................... D/R'd so no KO eh NK?

Gangsta Kim 12-19-05 08:57 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Gkillaz
best line-Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
(hahaha sick)

worst line- Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...(ok ok)

over all- nicce punches couldnt have done it better myself!!!!!!!!!
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Natural killa

best line-Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED

worst line- A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice (are we talking about cows??)lol

over all- wasnt that good no hate puches one nicce line
_______________________
Vote- Gkillaz05

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noname 12-21-05 09:36 AM

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GKillaz05 12-21-05 10:53 AM

What a bitch!!, take the loss kid and stut the fuck up!

%%%% 12-21-05 10:56 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GKillaz05
What a bitch!!, take the loss kid and stut the fuck up!


Stut the fuck up :bored:

Why don't YOu stut the fuck up?

%%%% 12-21-05 10:56 AM

And BTW,I'm not the kid here...you are.....kid :thumbup:

Stanza. 12-21-05 08:04 PM

Voted For: Natural killa

nk
Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
....Weak...........
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
...Nice Personal and Good Wordplay...
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
....Funny But A Lil Weak But hitz...
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
.....Im Guesiin Thats The Name of The account?....Nice personal and wordplay again I Like this bar...
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse
.....Weak.....

Overall You had some good wordplay and personals which were set up pretty nicely I like the fact that you actually didnt boost yourself up you stuck to all disses which was nice so Im giving you my v/

G

Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
.....Weakk.....
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
....Played Like Hell....
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
...Better Still Weakk...
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
......Better and Nice Set up and Wordplay....
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED
First Line was str8 2nd line'z concept was played so that kinda brought that bar down...

Overall i think that you came kinda weak considering the fact that you really couldnt set up your pucnhez rii and you used some played lines (no offense) but some of them were just reused concepts so that was kinda weak comin from somebody with 49 wins so srry I coudnt give you my v in this battle

If You Desire Please RTf in Any Battle Link In My Sig

Thanx

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B To The D 12-22-05 02:32 PM

This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 
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GKillaz05 12-22-05 02:43 PM

Young Un.. you should have dropped a vote, why you checkin' the pollz, you can see that in battle stats or my sig. 8-1! , lets see if I can get 20votes VS this herb. Well he out there Dick Ridin' like a motha fucka.

GKillaz05 12-23-05 10:47 AM

Uppin.......................................

noname 12-24-05 11:25 AM

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Rising Sun 12-24-05 03:03 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

-Natural Killa's best line:
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
Nice flow and decent personals but I wasn't really feeling the puns
-GKilla had really nice openers at the start (4 lines) with the wordplay. His verse was much wittier. For example, "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... Though his rhymes did not have as much personals, I think he won because of the amount of content in his rhymes: puns and similies.

GKillaz05 12-24-05 03:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pressence
Stut the fuck up :bored:

Why don't YOu stut the fuck up?


Becuz I can spell it, and you cant. You dumb fuck. 9, votes for me now, goin' to get give up yet, pussy-ass-bitch!


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