thanks for the feed drakel.....................

Word fam, this piece was dope as fuck.

I think overall, everyone held a certain level of consistency with the theme of the topic, each person tackling the topic their own way. And each person maintaining a balance between complexity with the vocabs, but also making the imagery real good without overflowing it with too many big words. Some people think that a lot of large intellectual words means a piece is good, it only works if you maintain a balance. I was particularly impressed with Narc, I think he delivered a nice verse especially considering I haven't seen anything topical from him. Atticus and Chymera held up a nice level of imagery and complexity with their verses. Mystic at first, his rhyming seemed a little off at first because the style was different to usual styles you see, but after reading it I have to say it worked well and offered a nice change up of things for this piece.

OVERALL: 9/10

upping and seriously alik hop of my clit stupid fucking bitch ur waack no one likes u leave

lol, that's a nice way of tellin him

rtf

done, now uppin for more.....didn't think we would get this much good feedback.

I thought this was nice, real good topic.

i personally like narc's and tech's the best....very good job with vocab and description, each whent on their own way of describing the topic. well done overall