god damn, come on people..........................

Yep 0-0 Just like i predicted on Page 3...RV's dieing...i swear...

it was 1-1. what happened?........................

god damn, come on people..........................

im 2 lazy to type anythin else from now on.

how hard is it to vote?.................................

god damn, come on people..........................

damn it come on. all my other battlez have like 2 votez a piece.

votez............................................. ...

Voted For: Wicked One

Vote- Wicked One

I thought Wicked One had cleaner punches, better Multis, neither cat had any personals that I could see...Wicked took wordplay, though it was played, with his last bar i.e. shells/tacobell...Flow was even, both catz had flow in their drops.

what you talking bout man? i had plenty of personalz.

Im sippin the life outta wicked like the capri sun, coco rum?,
Hiz shit iz wicked, but slang leavez like the fall so he's second to none.
^^one on hiz name.

Therez no chance wicked will come original, his shit is boring,
And i dont need a sign, cuz your name already gives me the warning.
^^nother on hiz name.

doesnt count the other bar i had but it doesnt look like a personal cuz he changed hiz sig.

Okay, personals are not just throwin' the dude's name in your bars...just cuz wicked's name is in your lines doesn't make it a personal. You have to make a play off their name...you just tossed his name in there.

a random example of a personal would be like this:

Like out of date slang sure he's totally "Wicked"
He couldn't be his name if he was makin' out with Witches//

Lame, but, you get the idea.

~1~

Voted For: Wicked One

a yo betta structure easier to unda stand and way harder punches overall vote//wicked

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Im sippin the life outta wicked like the capri sun, coco rum?,
Hiz shit iz wicked, but slang leavez like the fall so he's second to none.

i believe thatz hiz name.

Voted For: Wicked One

u won with just that first punch wicked u wer stronger in flow and punches
ven. u could get a lot better i have seen better of you
rtf
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Voted For: Wicked One

hmmm not a bad battle between beginners... couple of aight concepts in both verses... needs alot of polishing on both ends... but better than some of teh other garbage I've voted on in this forum...

Opener: Wicked One
Closer: Wicked One
Punches: Wicked One
Personals: Venture
Structure: Neither
Creativity: Wicked One
Complexity: Wicked One
Enjoyment: None

Vote: Wicked One