This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

both came with a very different approach..
nos's was an easier read n more straight forward
drakel had a decent verse and it seemed more on point in places.
not voting just dropping feed...topicals aint my thing..
good battle guys

This was feedback posted for Nostradamus
 

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:cool: .

.....................uppin........................

This was feedback posted for Nostradamus
 

Both come really dope, Nos your flow was sick it come
across like a proper freestyle stay up fams your verse
is doing it..

And Darkel your verse was well nice as well more complex
then Nos but simplistic in a way that to many people on
RV write topicals in the same style.
^^If you get me^^

This is a really decent battle good luck to both.

Stay up

1~

actually that makes no sense ?

Voted For: Nostradamus

I have to give this battle to Nos...

To win a battle in my oppinion you have to grab the attention of the reader and pull him into your words...

"but he doesn't want control, just to know his presence's felt
he's not judging every motion, but his arms are open for some help"
I liked that closing... pretty meaningfull...

Drakel: I feel that you didnt really have a strong opening... your verse was pretty good...
It had great vocab... and pretty touching...

Nostradamus: I felt your intro stole this battle for you...

"Yo
If they ask me who the fuck I am?
....Bro I spend no less than a second to tell em 'N O S'"
Great intro... really to the point..
I liked your multi's... especially these lines...

"like nitro bro this shit might blow!
...............My flow's electric in retrospective, I go
Above & beyond white snow & hydro combined yo"
It would be a good audio verse aswell...

Close battle... but final vote goes to Nos...

lmlo @ the intro 'stealing' the battle

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Jacked & backless, twist their neck backwards & snap it
Breaking down molecular fragments of their physical frabric

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

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dope line

Voted For: Drakel

i took while still pure of heart, mastered the art of ambition
till every step was crafted and matched equally with precision
i liked that line......

i have to say, it was close but i liked drakels better, he had a better flow and his description and staying on topic was better. he had some good vocab and structure in his verse was nice as well....good battle ya'll

Better flow eh..

Is that so..........:rolleyes:

c'mon nos, my flow was so flowing, it probly had more punches too, :cool:

Not to butt in, but if i'm correct, Tech's vote yesterday presents a problem since you're both in the same crew right now.