Voted For: Ill Technique

Tech:
He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career
4/10 - Played.
You Need Your Crew To Win, Since There's No I In D.Zaster
But When They're Gone And You Step U......
.......Everyone Breaks Out In Laughter
5/10 - ok.
I'll Hand You A Lump Of Coal For Christmas To Help Build A Spark
You Try To Blend Everyone's Style.....And Find Yourself Ripped Apart
5/10 - ok.
I'll Breaks Your Bars Faster Than Fat Kids To Make You D.Z. [for the idiots, dizzy]
So You Can Use It As An Excuse.......
For Posting More Disasters Than The Ones In Ya Siggy
7/10 - good personal.
I'll Place Another Period At The End Of Your Name, Make You Twice The Bitch
Cause You Further Under My Border Than A Chicken, Bean And Rice Mix!
4/10 - ok.
25/50.


You had a good flow, a couple good punchlines and some good personals.



D.Zaster:
bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
4/10 - ok.
Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it
6/10 - good.
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
3/10 - no.
You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks
But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags
3/10 - no.
Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations
Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations
6/10 - good punch.
22/50


Your flow was ok, your punches where decent, some ok personals.


Vote - Tech

LOl @ this.

Seriously.

Up............................

up. .................................................. ..............

up you wack fucks.........................................
:)
;)

This was feedback posted for D.Zaster
 

He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career

vs
bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations
Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations

V/ D.Z cause his Punches was good and hard hitting, with the wordplays. Ill T you had one bar of a good Punch, the other bars, I was just not feeling it because it was kinda played out, do some wordplays like D.Z did and I bet you'll get better bruh. One, O snap this is 200 Post..Sorry Don't have, I'll leave this as a feedback.

Voted For: D.Zaster

bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart

thats all i needed to ready, word, shit was illy, the rest was cool too...eh, not bad tech, nothing really fancy, or stood out, a couple played lines, like the elf shit...nothing too creative or witty, but you have the idea, keep up, aight?

v/dzaster