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Critic 01-11-06 08:23 AM

Voted For: Dopium

Reign won this battle, Nice attempt Allik but I wasn't
really feeling your verse.....

Reign ~ The structure was alright didnt really affect
the flow,.. I felt that some of your lines was pretty
predictable. And this bit u can tell was just a filler
and rushed... \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/

Knocking on her door patiently waiting for a answer.
She opened up to find out shes a belly dancer.

It don't really add up but thats the only fault I can
moan about !! sorry thats why I'm a Critic...

Vocab didn't really have any, flowed well, but uping
complexity. Other then that it was a pretty good
drop.

Allik ~ I liked the concept, the whole good side bad
side, but other then that the whole thing was pretty
basic. It flowed well, but no emotion, vocab !!! it was
alright.....

Vote Reign had a solid verse, and was a good read

Stay up both

1~

Critic 01-11-06 08:25 AM

Also if one of u wanna battle me I would be more then happy to comply !!

Holla @ Me !!!

1~

Valerie 01-12-06 06:24 PM

coo thanks for the honest vote man! Ight uppin this fam. ;)

allik war 01-13-06 12:32 PM

hey critic thanx for an honest vote...could careless who it for cuz like ive mentioned im not really the battle type i just write songs...but besides so many hataz on this site why waste my time droppin a hot verse feel me?...thanx 4 the honesty wanna battle cool fam stay up dawg peace...reignyour really i dunno no words in the english dictionary can explain ur ignorance...u started a thread squashing the beef wit all otha cats jus cuz they hatin on me 2 n yet not wit me...not dat i care who likes or dislikes me but it jus show's ur immaturity uppin this battle 4 real honest votes peace

Mentalz 01-13-06 07:51 PM

Voted For: Dopium

lol ok u dissed him he was talking about sluts and shit ol................................................ ...........

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Valerie 01-13-06 08:05 PM

lol @ mentalz but yea common people one last honest vote ight please. :thumbup:

Valerie 01-14-06 12:06 AM

uppin this people common one last honest vote ok please. :thumbup:

Valerie 01-14-06 01:45 PM

uppin thisfam ight honest votes please ok. :thumbup:

Valerie 01-14-06 07:13 PM

ight Rv we uppppppppppppppppppin thissssss$s$s$s$$$ ok please hinest votes.

Valerie 01-15-06 11:38 PM

ight uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin this fam ight pleast need a final vote. :thumbup:

Valerie 01-16-06 02:30 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.

p4ntzistheish 01-16-06 09:56 PM

This was feedback posted for allik war
 
....This is the most bootleg version of Guilty Conscience...except not nearly as good. And I didn't joke cuz you siad no hate votes and I hate both of you. But damn this was pretty bad. The rhymes were elemntary at bset. But Hey you get a 1/10 for effort.

allik war 01-16-06 11:53 PM

good but dont think im lettin mentalz whack vote stay...gotta do it lke it says in the rules u kno damn well the second strobe see that shit he gonna remove it

Valerie 01-17-06 12:23 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by allik war
good but dont think im lettin mentalz whack vote stay...gotta do it lke it says in the rules u kno damn well the second strobe see that shit he gonna remove it


dude admit it u fuckin SUCK at everything battlin, life and even fuckin ya girl man what makes u think that removin a vote is gonna stop me from winnnin? :nono:

Terumoto 01-17-06 12:54 AM

This was feedback posted for allik war
 
If you lose this battle, it aint cos of hate votes...


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