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twenty9 01-29-06 10:31 PM

uppin for more votes............................................. ...again............................... come on ppl vote this is getting a little repetitive

twenty9 01-30-06 02:15 PM

please ppl just vote, im gettin real tired of doin this .................................................. .................................

*Antic* 01-30-06 04:55 PM

Voted For: twenty9

Vote - twenty9

Here's tha deal...Flow was a tie, nothin' incredible from either cat...twenty9 took Punches, because he wasn't talkin' about himself for his whole drop, and he was actually tryin' to diss...Chi, you jabbered on about yourself and how hot you are, with only the occasional punch...both catz had some pretty weak punches, but twenty9 atleast tried to aim his...there were no personals or wordplay, zero, zip, none...twenty9 took multis with some weak two syllable multies...both catz need to come with better concepts, atleast attempt wordplay, and try some personals to elevate...pretty weak battle...

Vote - twenty9

twenty9 01-30-06 08:55 PM

thanx *Antic*................i guess................ uppitty uppitty uppitty for more votes

Nick Knack 01-30-06 08:59 PM

Voted For: twenty9

chi townz- your verse sucked. you had no punchez, all glorifying yourself, and still werent that good. you need to make real punchez or else you are gonna be clowned.

twenty- your punchez were bad, but least you had some. keep workin on ya punchez, better concepts mainly. cuz you had some played ass shit and some just plain bad shit.

v- twenty

twenty9 01-31-06 01:24 PM

uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. .........................

twenty9 01-31-06 06:43 PM

uppin for one more vote.............................................. .................................................. ................

_Elevation_ 01-31-06 07:10 PM

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 
checkin pollssss

twenty9 01-31-06 11:12 PM

come on ppl just one more vote, i dont wanna have to up anymore..............................

okay 02-01-06 12:20 AM

Voted For: twenty9

a yo i spite dz rhymez so hard make the floor shake...
have yo mama sayin "son i think we havin an earth quake"...
^^^weak
u see dis dudez a fake u bitch ass cake fukin flakestop rappin yo flows is a waste ...
^^^No
ill pumble dis bitch to the ground u see nigga uz a clown...
turn dis bitch upside down and turn yo fake ass smile into a frown...
^^^Weak
u see ill tell yo gurl to put u out and ill have my dick all in her mouth ...
u see nigga u shouldve learned wat ima bout!!!!!!!
^^^No

chi-town out hear spittin shit like he was a broken toilet,
he comes up with the masta plan and i'll still fuckin foil it/
^^^decent opener
i'll battle any bitch any muthafuckin race,
break into ur house and shit on ya face/
^^^no
i see more blood in a hospital then i see in you,
havin fuckin temper tantrums like you was two/
^^^ight
like a magician u just pretendin,
like paul martin ya face is offendin/
^^^no
u aint a gangsta u just another fuckin copy,
like a computer u gotta 3 and a half inch floppy/
^^played
stories about you gotta be a fable,
cuz all ya do is bring bitch 2 the table/
^^^ight
ya rhymes is loose just like a fuckin pornstar,
i'll go punch 4 punch and win with just one bar/
^^^no

V.twenty9 he came wit a better more consistent verse....that didnt have all played shit....chi werk on ur punchs an concepts
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