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rexless 03-11-06 07:46 AM

Voted For: Carmelo

Yo Carmelo... amma make this quick and dispose you like a CONDOM/
my punches will leave you feelin like IRANIANS gettin BOMBED ON/
aight
hold on.. it's STARTED.. Like aladdin and his CARPET/
I travel miles making victims like you into my TARGET/
ok but no punch
am cold HEARTED, so PLEASE... EMCEE'S don't like ur lyrics so ur WASTING EM'/
your not ENTERTAINING EM', ur ego's bigga than newcamp STADIUM/
homosexuals u be DATING EM', i got proof but i aint NAMING EM'/ 3 line bars are never good,
So send your shitty LYRICS boi ill eat em up like SNIKERS/
Ur body oder smells worst than Paris Hilton's NICKERS/
nah, weak
Ur words are small like ur DICK IS, so pay ATTENTION/
Ur just a thick shit with low COMPREHENSION/
just flowin weak,
not to forget to MENTION my lyrics fucks everything it TOUCHES/
CLUTHING ur thoughts then FUCKING your mentallity in CRUTHES/
aight
cuz my scripture slithers slowly and attacks you LIKE A COBRA/
inner POISON keeps on GROWING ETERNALLY taking OVER/
nah
what a JOKA!... ur tht fat bitch on da pitch hu cud never play FOOTY/
Lost a few pounds then got rich but still got BULLIED!/
nah
you don't even know i fist fucked your mother CAMELO/
yo stay MELLOW! but don't forget to giv her my HELLO/(lol) i herd something similer to this from remmy martin... weak..
haha my lyrics portray STARDOM but ur probs gettin a HARDON/
I'll type this 4-line leave u sayin 'i beg your PARDON'/
weak ending danm...


Lets reveal what you conceil in your little rhyme book
you'd prolly make more hits throwin ya puns witta blind hook
decent
this shits TEXTbook to me, & your clearly the queer emcee
I must be the ''teachers pet'' cause you aint correctin-me*
aight
now your collectin 3...losses, burn n fire you like bosses
you could have a statue in your honor
............................and your presence still aint colossus
aight
the way I floss-is..somthin you can never be familiar with
your production could gimme a beat..
......................................and its what I'm killin-ya-with
aight
use your tools against you fool...then take 'em to school..
Maz loves me so much...
...........I could have him on '' all fours '' like a bar stool...
ha good,
I'm in pocket like pool, your scarface before the coke
Hopin to be tight as pac..
....................but only if your walkin on that thin rope
nah,
Basically theres no hope, ya production is a failure to mankind
One read of your rhymes and Even I knew ya out your damn-mind
nah,
closer:
thinkin you can contest with the best...its just not right...
You could be in chuck noriss' jeans...
......................................and you still wouldnt be tight!
aight ending,

well you was more consistent with punches and was slightly more creative my vote is for you carmelo...



* now P.M strobe plez carmelo *


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