Will do thanx fam

what's hot:
nice beat
lyrics pretty hot yo
got nice voice

what's coo:
delivery, emotion and flow. they all coo, but could be upped bit. but you just startin' out so it's all good nah mean?

what's not:
lol quality

overall, this a nice lil joint man. you really comin' up in this shit yo. props yo. stay up. 8/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232650

beat was nice... down south vibe...

verse.. some ya punches were played fam... but i dunno when you wrote or recorded this..

A1.. tight like pussy... you get me


lmfao @ the outro




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on another note wordplay was str8.... the other punches were nice... lol @ the tony dungy line... ya flow sounds like it can be upped compared to that other track of yours i listened to.. but u got the basic idea so i can't really say much on that... overall pretty consistant verse my man.. keep droppin

Thanx ya..i appreciate the feed

only way i can grow and elevate

appreciate it