This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 

better verse i thought....had better punches wordplay flow and whatever else lol....other dude had no problems hits punches just werent hard enough.

Wtf... Vote U Lazy Dick Heads

yo this site is wack as fuck with voting..



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Voted For: Artistik.

Get your change up fag, or i'll kick that ass n you still can't brag..
cuz you'll only be a pac-man.. n i'll provide the L's that nickel bag
how great your LBL, now i can expose what the worst is..
this aint a tag battle..
so it's UNTOLD of who will help with your verses :/
your far from great.. but i see why you took the time u waited to help
cuz shit..
i'd be in the legends TOO.. if i nominated MYSELF

vs

I'm cloutin you son.. here's a dollar, 'coz no doubt you's a bum
And I'm out-livin this trash, as opposed to ure ass still livin out of some
I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you

Art had the better lines and personals here but both came a bit weak in this battle compared to what Iv seen them both drop. Nicks problem is that his first line was wak as shit with the taddled and raddled stuff. And his lines were really stretched and it messed up his flow, I dont care much for the structure but the flow still counts when Im reading and judging. Not too many quotables in this battle but it could just be coz they didnt drop to many lines though. Either way I got Artistik taking this with more quotables and better flow and punches. RTF in my battle with luciano please

This was feedback posted for Artistik.
 

Dam !!!! Art come sick !! checking polls for my fam
dope drop.

so it's UNTOLD of who will help with your verses :/

dam

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This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 

pollz............................................. .........

Voted For: Artistik.

my vote goes to artistik...nick..you came fuckin weak this time...artistik...you didn't do so hot either..but it's whatever


i kno my position bitch, n here's a new flip with this par bar
cuz all my punches are steller man.. now nfc all-stars

stupid....1/5

Get your change up fag, or i'll kick that ass n you still can't brag..
cuz you'll only be a pac-man.. n i'll provide the L's that nickel bag

weak punch, decent word play - 2/5

how great your LBL, now i can expose what the worst is..
this aint a tag battle..
so it's UNTOLD of who will help with your verses :/

good punch - 4/5

i dunno who pumped you up, but they need to chill for you get hurt
cuz king solo on self esteam.. he tried to gain it back here on rapverse

okay attempt, shitty execution..2/5

your far from great.. but i see why you took the time u waited to help
cuz shit..
i'd be in the legends TOO.. if i nominated MYSELF

this is so played, its never been used...0/5


9/25


Ya boys have done tattled.. told me you suck, so I'll leave ya rhymes rattled
I seen ya played nameplay 'n' weak punch from a quote..
.. and that was just in ya fuckin punchline battle!

a bit stretched..weak execution..but overall...decent...3/5

I'm cloutin you son.. here's a dollar, 'coz no doubt you's a bum
And I'm out-livin this trash, as opposed to ure ass still livin out of some

see what you're doin, but poor execution...2/5

See me dump the lines.. and you, deal with the fact that you suck at rhymes
Then watch me drop some A-material.. and crush some at the same fuckin time

no 0/5

This fuckin whore's soft.. and against him, poor punches I'm seein more of
With his verse resemblin' a rodeo... as it rides the bull and then falls off

no 0/5

I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you

decent i guess... 2/5


7/25

art - 9/25
mick - 7/25

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thx, but can we get this closed pleaseG?

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

ight, ima have to go with nick on this joint. He didnt have a very strong verse but neither did artistik. I felt like nick had a better flow and his punches connected better. The only ones i really got were the last too, these seems like more of a personal battle or some shit.

nick's closer got it though
I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you
^^
I wasn't feelin too much of artistik's verse he jsut aint really show me nothin this time.
return the favor.....links in the sig

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wtf @ only votes for me getting dq'.. this is some bullshit

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

nick had more punchlines but..art had better flow and structure...i have to give nick the vote for he had more punches...

NO HATE..

give my battle an honest vote..

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Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you

^

That line did it for me Artistik was great styll if he provide explainations for his lines, He probably would've gotten my vote

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somebody fucking vote you lazy bitches

Hmm...I guess I'm too Lazy so provide significent feed back