It is funny to me that you said I was the one getting hyped up and taking shit too seriously... and yet you are the one who is getting all agitated, and it is showing in your posts.

www.myspace.com/JimmyPocketz

nah man..you just needa get laid..and stop caring about spelling so much...go get some pussy man......

Get laid, now there is a completely irrelevant thing to say.


Anyway, postpone the beef son. I'm off to listen to some of Troops music.

Who Dat.


The beat was ill, and lyrically you were fucking nice. Although I thought that you wasted a few more seconds than you should before you actually started dropping, and I was mightily disappointed at ONLY ONE verse. It must have been a whole fucking around thing for you. But yeah, that shit was nice...

"sorta like a 3 year old I'm known to draw the line"

... I don't care if others didn't like it, I did. :)

haha postpone the beef... lol well im out neways..going to get highhhhhhh and play pool.... ill start shit with ya later man..good talking hahaha

(knob)

~nuff said~ ... lol jk about that.....


peaceeeeeee

On The Grind.

The beat was nice, lyrically the track was pretty solid. The first dude was awesome, and Troop... you held it together in the 2nd verse, although I felt that towards the end you got a slight bit choppy with the flow, and rhymewise at the end of your verse I felt it was overly accent forced. That is just me being honestly critical. Overall, the track was nice, a little short like the Who Dat track... I want to hear some four minute shit from you. A solid track from you alone so I can really get a feel of your stuff.

Thanx 4 the Feed Nick

So now u see why i left text alone?

Hold Ya Head.


Personally, I think this is the best of the three tracks that I have heard. I thought the beat was a lot better because it wasn't a generic style rap beat as such, like the other two were. Also, I felt that lyrically it was the superior track and both you and Q managed to stay on point with the flow of the beat. In my opinion whoever it was who dropped the second verse was the better of the two. I felt that the second verse was a lot more clearer, it flowed better to me and lyrically was just better. The multies in the second verse gave it that edge, and the delivery was dope. But, not to take anything away from the first verse, I thought it was good. It worked well with the beat, the lyrics were nice and it was a different approach with the delivery than the second verse which helped to make the track better, as it was not plain and straight-lined in its style.

And yes, I see why you left text alone.

I would to, but I am...

A) - Too cheap to buy a microphone.

and...

B) - Too lazy to set it up, download Cool Edit or whatever and make a track.

Not good 2 Be Lazy Fam

but i use 2 feel the same

but i got alot 2 learn in this Audio Shit

its a big Step from Batteling & Freestyling in the streets

its so much shit u gotta have down pact...

but im slowly learning day by day..but i appreciate the feed

True, it is not good to be lazy.


And generally I am not, I just have to be highly motivated to do something. I mean, I run in the morning, do my weight training and shit... because I am motivated not to turn into a fat grease monkey.


But, its just the whole prospect of recording a track and posting it on the net for nerd approval isn't entirely motivating to me. And because I don't plan on pursuing a career in the rap industry, I do not require the internet for posting tracks for that purpose either.

So, I will stick to my keyboard for now. :)

Naw i only care about constructive criticisim

if my shit suck..tell me it suck...so i can get better

tell me wha i did good...wha i did bad..and how i can fix em

cuz im fuckin wit my boy Ent company and shit..so im usein this Cool Edit

and cheap mic 2 elevate my audio game and Prescense on the mic

I have a future in music..so this is wha i do..and im JUS now startin 2 take it seriously

but with every track im getting better...so in due time..

Well, for someone just really starting... you are better than most people on this fucking site. But then, lets be real... that ain't saying much is it.

RV SUCKS!!

3 more wins and I'm fucking done with it, text-wise at least.

thats wassup...

ya aint sayin much that im better than alot of kids here

But there are some dope ass heads here

and u gotta start somewhere righ