come on please drop a vote....

wow.....over almost 800 views......

holy shit.......................

This was feedback posted for Tha_Don_of_Mics
 

I don't know if you tryed but it seemd like you didnt. This verse was weak. Like, I could see you know how to make wordplay - And maybe you choose not to make it workout. But I don't know.

Bad verse. I bet you could do better.

My bad. I accidently clicked reply.

Aphs:
I don't know if you tryed but it seemd like you didnt. This verse was weak. Like, I could see you know how to make wordplay - And maybe you choose not to make it workout. But I don't know.

Bad verse. I bet you could do better.

Capo:
You're verse was terrible and have the shit didn't rhyme. You're new, it looks like. But I dont really have advice. Just keep practicing, you'll get the hang of it.

V/ Aphs.


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Voted For: Tha_Don_of_Mics

Ay yo, SOme of your lines are ill... "Cuz, for a runt like you, work is always open at willy wonka"... Nice line man, Fro what I can see you killed him