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La Cosa Nostra 12-02-08 08:29 AM

Workin' this late day, you're a brand name, silly fathomed pup workin' his habit,
Nah, but I hate lay, I'd really rather stand up when I murder a Faggot.

weak fucking wordplay on his name buddy... rhyming is alright... flow is horrible..

how about i put it simple, fatass, no PH and ya reps dying
so to make you feel comfortable, even I'LL use some stretch lines


there.. go on... keep it comming dickface... bar for bar

12-02-08 08:32 AM

I told someone else, I'm done writing text. But I'll produce a similar concept from the battle verse you just looked at.

And I will bust you with a blow, air could knock u off-balance 'n mess ya, I'll bet'cha,
It won't involve you touchin' your toes when I say you'll get taken out on a stretcher.

La Cosa Nostra 12-02-08 08:37 AM

look i hardly know you fucker, all i know is that I'm bigger and older
I'll slit ya throat with the blade I got from ripping ya shoulder


fuckface.. keep going with wordplay and were gonna have a problem here....

12-02-08 08:41 AM

but bro if you actually thought for a second your text wasn't shit
Then xanax couldnt save you from the fucking downer you're gonna get.

La Cosa Nostra 12-02-08 08:46 AM

that makes no sense...

what else can I say to end this fucken battle n demonstrate the game
ill fill your mouth with a double barrel to try and elevate your brain


eat a dick up till you hiccup... thats a game over line.

12-02-08 08:47 AM

"that makes no sense"

"eat a dick up til you hiccup"

The holes in your brain could capture sunlight.

La Cosa Nostra 12-02-08 08:59 AM

mother fucker please, you fairy, i'll slut you 'bum fluff' see
cause your wack punches fucking barly upper cut my knee
your fucked, see I'm iller, ill thrill n drill ya cunt till i kill ya
treat your slut mother like this line, and just fucking fill her
2V your dad should be slapped and your mom is a cunt
for comming out the hospital with a kid this ugly as fuck
im making some magic, ill rip you off from touching my steezo
cause your skills lacking like skin pigment of a fucking albino

2v you are not doper than me... nor is spul.... nor is elle... nor are any of you...

J. Luth 12-02-08 09:02 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Baphomet
the fuck are you talking about kid...

one i didnt lose that battle... two your a shit battler in my opinion battling is face to face real shit.. ive lost all respect for voting systems on the net thats why I dont do it here, here its all about who likes you more... theres no justice in it and cats are full of shit...
You didn't lose? Well, isn't the reason you made this thread cuz everyone there agreeing you did? LOL fact is, with that much of a garbage verse. The fact you couldn't even CLEARLY drop better than it, keystyle or not, is fucking weak

and no i dont do text battles... that was a fuck around thread where me and that elle bitch dropped a few disses back and forth which lasted for a good 10 minutes of fast typing... then she said she won, i told her she was diluded, and a bunch of wack mother fuckers who have internet love for the dumb hoe cause she posts slutty bikini pics of herself came in and started beefing with me...
Doesn't seem too much of just a "fuck around battle" if you gotta come to another site to get opinions now does it?

truth is spul, you, 2v......all of you cunts are here saying my quick verse is weak, wack, whatever the fuck you like.........but then i look up your text battles... and all i see is shit thats roughly similar, maybe slightly more on the punchlines because youve had time to think about shit but always with less rhyming technique...
LOL that shit owns you son

i look at battles youve had a week to write for finals of tournaments......and think, fuck......if i spat that infront of a crowd theyd have no fucking reaction except stand there like............ehhhh... righteo pal.... and none of your shit that youve spent time on is majorly superior to the verse i posted in this thread....
lmao comparing text to real life. oh boy..

you just got ideas in your head man, a fucken fickle ego that your the shit...

get real... thats all im gonna say to you.... your not dope... you should take out all those acalades in your sig out aswell cause that shit is like false advertising........where i come from, thats called pretending...............pretending to be the shit when your actually nothing special....
rofl that'd be the same as me telling you "stop repping your undefeated record, that's false advertising". Thing is tho, yours actually is. since you cared so much to get strobe to take out your loss.


LOL tho

1). My shit from 2006 isn't shit to where I am now, but still shits on the material you drop.

2). ROFL @ you saying "I could drop what you guys spit in text in real life in a face to face battle and wouldn't get a laugh"

yoooooo.... idiot.... it's called Text for a reason. You DON'T write the same style of punchlines for text that you do in a face to face battle and vice versa. No wonder you keep catching L's to herbs. Didn't you almost lose that battle to the last herb you battled with on here before making a thread in LL?

You're the one who's garbage man.

La Cosa Nostra 12-02-08 09:02 AM

i dont try on battles against newbs so shut the fuck up about my text lines...

i wreck guys entire fucking personalitys in real life.... but you cats are full of shit and have pathetic inflated egos that are false advertising..........majorly....

J. Luth 12-02-08 09:04 AM

oh and I don't really like 2v too much. But his shit obviously better than yours.

LOL @ you coming with lines that have been used since 04.

aka shoulder blade/blade lines.

and filler/fill her wordplay? Rofl really?

come on dude. lmaoooo

wow... can't wait to hear the excuses on that garbage.

La Cosa Nostra 12-02-08 09:06 AM

spul you arab monkey.. ill punch you fair cunt..
you might aswell throw in the towel like turban hindus with a hair cut

La Cosa Nostra 12-02-08 09:08 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL
oh and I don't really like 2v too much. But his shit obviously better than yours.

LOL @ you coming with lines that have been used since 04.

aka shoulder blade/blade lines.

and filler/fill her wordplay? Rofl really?

come on dude. lmaoooo

wow... can't wait to hear the excuses on that garbage.

what?

i dont need no fucken excuses...

you need excuses you lame punk...

ive dropped loads of wordplay in this thread now....

you cant even fucking rhyme and 2v DID throw in the towel and tried to do some sort of haiku bullshit...

12-02-08 09:11 AM

Nos es stupid yes
He contains no brain power
Thoughts; being weakness

J. Luth 12-02-08 09:12 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Baphomet
spul you arab monkey.. ill punch you fair cunt..
you might aswell throw in the towel like turban hindus with a hair cut


Yo roflmao... throw in the towel? really?

again, another 2004 concept. I can bring up the link if you want. Appoco w/e his name is. used that same line, hindu/throw in the towel wordplay against me in J.Poll's league title match.

come on man, and again all the "wordplay" you use is all played. Check rapmusic, bragginwrites, bboys, projectrhyme. Shit you using NOW and think is fresh has been used soo many years ago.


Get with the times before you ever want to call yourself dope man.

La Cosa Nostra 12-02-08 09:14 AM

watch the time it takes spul to concoct any sort of wordplay line....


stupid cunt... hes a shit battler... if i had any faith in the voting on these websites i might consider doing record battles still.. but everyone has an opinion on me now a days its impossible..

you cunts fucking either love me or love to hate me too much now a days for battling... i said ill give tito a battle just cause ive got about a million lines i can throw at that dickhead... but i can garentee you ill watch a bunch of haters vote and say his weak fake disses were better than mine and im SURE to catch votes against due to accent differences...


"ohh i cant understand you man"... yeah fuck outta here....


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