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Atetrack define' 04-10-03 10:50 AM

u pup up up up up up up and a -mother-fucking-way

Atetrack define' 04-15-03 11:35 PM

still uppin

JaE 04-16-03 11:26 AM

drop was ill wit the imagery, form was decent for the most, bars could have been a little more even to help flow but still ill shit, keep it up, elevate -1

Atetrack define' 04-16-03 11:01 PM

up up up up up yall...giants come visit sometimes...erm yeah

Alias-C 04-27-03 04:26 PM

what up man, sorry I took kinda long to reply...
Anyway man... I was feeling this, no doubt... the shit is very fucking decriptive of the streets... rhymes sound mad gritty... you got nice imagery like cats been said...
I wasn't really feeling the flow on your first verse... but then the rhythm seemed to pick up a bit on the second one...
Nice spit dawg...

-1-

WOOSHY 04-27-03 04:32 PM

hya mna this was cool i like ur style drop a line http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41581

inspire 04-28-03 09:11 AM

dope as usual... nothing can be said that hasnt been already except...
wha ta ta
^^pootie tang is the shit

Atetrack define' 04-28-03 09:48 AM

ahahhaha pootoie tang is the shit....

dirty d is a bad man..a real dirty man...

the best bit in the entire fi;lm is the start...when they is selling the cocaine,and they need a tester to prove the shit,and the dumbest kid in the ghetto rides past hahah,i fucking love that part...

g3n3sis 04-28-03 03:17 PM

Good lyrics .. good flow .. what more can yah ask for?? greast rhyme.. keep em comin

Atetrack define' 04-29-03 09:05 AM

cats this shit was the first ever post i put on here,if you looking for illness just lok up the name ahha,i got a few posts on here yall might be liking...
bismillah

BlackLion 05-05-03 02:20 PM

u on point man.

Atetrack define' 05-06-03 02:10 AM

yuhuh thankyou....ahah aits still going shits crazy...

BabyBluAccord 05-06-03 10:17 AM

for what i read of it it was phat i didnt have time to read the whole thing but it was good


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