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Axiom 09-12-03 11:59 PM

I just cleaned some free posts... keep that shit down to a minimum...

*EDIT* I took away madd preacher's vote... he only has 2 wins... no way he can vote in ELITE.

Perfekt 09-13-03 12:38 AM

13



like SNL's Ambigously Gay Duo skit...Berg stop riding our dick!....
i seen ur sig..'Fall Of The Regime?' how?...no one ever heard of TIC

6 / 10 Eh .. It was an alright set up , could have been punchin harder

shit, Avalon beat u dyslexic bringin NOLAVA, ur easy like a problem
2 solve...
then one of the illest in regime beat u but couldn't teach ur verses
to Evolve..

7.5 / 10 No Lava Was kinda weak but the Set up with Evolve was nice

how u gonna act like a Dr. Evil?...when 'Power' is sumthin u lack?..
its lights out!!.....like a Somalian dressed in nuthin but black......

8.5 / 10 Nice Metaphor That Livend the Verse up a lot

ur style is played..like the 80's jeans wit holes & filled wit a patch..
ur wack, even Knight called u out even after caught bitin from a
wrestling match...

5 / 10 Eh... Kinda Weak

'Reverse Bladed Sword?',more like nerf javelin,cuz its the Revenge
of The Nerd....
Fuck Iceberg,even RB held a ceremony namin him biggest of herbs

6 / 10 Ehhh..... Still Kinda Weak, Set up was alright

u claim u hate Regime,but yet in the forum ur the top rated poster
& 28-40 shows u couldn't deliver fire, even wit defaulty toasters..

9.5 / 10 Thats what I expect From 13 2 punches and a metaphor in 1 line set up perfectly

better collab wit Tom Cruise..for u this battle is Impossible Mission
^notice the setup to show that ur fake, like a backslidin Christian

6.5 / 10 Alright Metaphor coulda been better

time to serve up this slip for this bitch, get rid of the shit talker...
and leave Berg more banned than 2 Live Crews Luke Skywalker...

6.5 / 10 ONce Again Metaphor was kinda weak , but punch was decent

nuthin but personals,why play wit words,when goin for the core?..
i see the bitch in u and David Banner already said that Real Girls
Get Down On The Floor...

6.5 / 10 It was a good line but not good enough to finish a Battle


Line By Line - 62 / 90.... 69%
Punches - 6 / 10
Metaphors - 8 / 10
Flow - 8 / 10
Multis - None
Wordplay - 7 / 10
Complexity - 7 / 10
Personals - 5.5 / 10
^^ - 41.5 / 60 - 74 %


Final Score - 71 . 5% C




IceBurg


13th disciple also known as 13th dickhead the leader of regime..
He claims he mean.... please, this bitch rocks a jerry curl like Mike did in his teens...(micheal Jackson)

[b] 6.5 / 10 Ehh... Im not a fan of dissin sumone on there Appearence but Otherwise it was an alright Metaphor


I've been waitin to have u banned, fuck the rest of them herbs..
I've seen better MC's than him on MCdonald's signs in the suberbs..

7.5 / 10 MC / Mcdonalds Line kinda played but none the less a good set up and Metaphor

Watch me Iron this nigga out like my name was Blac & Decker
Bitch I'm the big cheese round here...U justa shred of cheddar

1 / 10 U Justa Shred Of Chedder..? Any resemblance to Younggadgets Spaggetti Line? Wow its not only a horrible line but a horrible biten line.... WACKNESS AT ITS WORST

13th get ready to be slipped...considered yaself checked..
When Erect.. only thing he good for, is askin men "Who's Next"(check his title under name)

7 / 10 Nice Set up and Punch

His mind gets outta wack when I talk back about his kids, he trips...
Well guess what? After I fucked ya wife, she told me u looked good in pink slips...(Oooo)

5.5 / 10 First Line Was Wack as Fuck , But second Line Compenstates with a nice Metaphor

Ol sweet & sour ass nigga....Fuck U and ya pussy ass crew
wit no skills ya spits didn't do shit but Evolve into Sureal wack raps & H4iKu's..

6.5 / 10 Nice Metaphor..

Beat me? U tried to.....Man this motha fucka aint real..
Suckin people off for votes is the only time 13th "Blessed wit skills"(check his sig)

8.5 / 10 Nice Set Up and Personal , One of your best lines

The deal....Ya words are more useless than a pussy Thug named Whyte...
While mine pull more TriX than that pokemon lovin fagget Jay Cyph....

5 / 10 Weak...

Thats word life...This a pinkslip battle but you'll never see the end of me
13th you's a pussy and Spliv still can't lose his virginity

5 / 10 Alright Line Weak for a Finisher



Line By Line - 45.5 / 90 50%
Punches - 6 / 10
Metaphors - 8 / 10
Flow - 7 / 10
Multis - None
Wordplay - 6 / 10
Complexity - 8 / 10
Personals - 10 / 10
^^ 46 / 60 - 78 %


Final Score - 64 % D


Winner Of The Pink Slip Battle In A Close One............ 13



- Perfekt



EDIT - AMBIGOUS POLL MY VOTE FOR 13 , FOR SUM REASON IT WONT LET ME POLL MY VOTE.... SO COULD YOU POLL IT

Sureal 09-13-03 12:43 AM

^Now Thats A Break Down... 4-2 For 13... Uppin For More Votes..
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Derive 09-13-03 01:03 AM

well anyways....i cant top that shit lol...but anyways ill cut to the chase

13th's Verse:
Punches:8/10
Wordplay:7/10
Flo:8/10
Metaphors:7/10
Muilties:None That i Saw
Complexity:7/10

Total:37/50

IceBerg:
Punches:7.5/10
Wordplay:6/10
Flo:6/10
Metaphors:6.5/10
Muilties:None That I Saw
Complexity:8/10

Total:36/50

Was A Very Close Match But...

Vote-13Th


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