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Ricochet. 09-12-03 03:00 PM

Close Battle but i see TOOO many d/r so il break it down as best i can.....


I'm Merking You With No Threat, You're A Weak Vet Running A Slow Mile
So Merciful With Bleak Text EnVy Feared Personals So You Reset Ya Whole Profile
good personal nice flow... no punches or meta... but OK opener... 6/10

Behold Ya Record's Ashy, He Has Minimum Genes Therefore He Folds His Baggies
So Called Pimp, Permed With Hemp. .But Isn't This The Shrimp Who Stole His Avy?
LOL good personal again,, good flow again but this 1 hit slightly harder than the last... 8/10
Promoteless Fig, Like Crack I'll Smoke This Twig, Followed Me & Quotes His Sig.
With A Small Rhyme His Kin Must Be Sheep, Supposedly His G.reatest O.f A.ll T.ime Is Big
people say this is played? ive seen it ONCE b4 so f yall.... good shit 8/10

I Don't Care When I Fight Faces On The Right Cases, I'm Takin Envy's Place In 5 Paces
Even Your Text Is Red Necked But I'll Put You To Choke Like Pares Of Tight Laces
this was aight not too hard hittin.. seen u do better so.. meh 6/10

I'll Throw Spits At This Dude Cus I'm All Heat Even The Scripts That I Use
But How Is EnVy Gonna Stick To Beatin Me, If He Can't Even Stick To His Crew!?
haha nice personal AGAIN this was on point.. period... 9/10

OVERALL = 37/50


EnVy.... shud b good...

.:Brooklyn Holla So We Can Kick Dis Fake Bitch Out:.

First Off Your Wack Couldnt Blow The Roof Off Even Bursting Ceilings
Strap Bombs To Your Heart Cuz Im Planning On Hurting Your Feelings
1st line was wack.. 2ND LINE was goood.. so i wana give it a good rating but the 1st was too corny so it jus gets a 7 sorry.. 7/10

Your Punches Are All Thoughts N No Action Like Cyber~Sex
Take A Pic Of My Dick Cuz Even If U Bit I Still Bring Harder~Copy In Text
Cyber sex is actually quite played.. ive seen it better in a Sniper freestyle... and this cudda been done alot better 6/10

Brooklyn Raps Like Light~Weights Cuz His Dickriders Cant Be Held Down (Metaphor Lol)
If You Thought This Battle Wasnt Faire (Fair) I Label Brooklyn The Clown
haha great shit... nice.. nice....nice 9/10

I Rip Brooklyn Like It Was A Slammin Dunk Contest Cuz Im Slammin Brooklyn All~ Across~ The ~Net (internet)
Putting More Shots In This Fag Then A Emergency~Vet
this was forced.... but good attempt 7/10

.:.:GeT OuT Of My CiTy KiD:.:.
He Gunna Throw Beef In The Air So He Can Say He Raised The Stakes
His User Name Is Brooklyn But Where He Is From Isnt No Mistake (From: No Where)
1st line was killa.. 2nd fell off.. so like the 1st line it will only get a 7/10

OVERALL = 36

wow i wasnt expectin it 2 be that close... but b4 i even broke it down.. after i read it i was sure brook had won.... Envy u have some ill ideas.. but u also have some played shit.. geti that fixed and ur on ur way to becomin str8 up ILL... good battle tho

VOTE - BROOKLYN

EnVy Ny 09-12-03 03:33 PM

Ricochet Vote Will GET EDITED He Is In My Crew...Learn How To Read A Sig Next Tyme N Get Off Brooks.... (Censored) HAHA

Uppin

pot1ent 09-12-03 03:45 PM

Brooklyn...

I seen some of your other battles, like your style but on this verse you didn't quite pull it off with your usual qaulity...it wasn't bad but i seen you come way stronger and this battle was one where it was needed...

Envy...

You had some good lines and come strong enough to beat brooklyn...maybe he came half assed....iunno

...seriusly!!...lol

...

Envy got this through better qaulity and yes brooklyn did have some good lines but i found some of his newbish...which shouldn't be at this level of battle

That's it..nothin more

Vote-Envy

bone crusher 09-12-03 04:04 PM

soldier relly summed everything up
i think brooks wordplay was grand
punches stuck
personals were deep
envy was played
not up to par
nuff said

TriX 09-12-03 04:15 PM

This is great...

Envy your deleting votes from your own crew because he voted against you, now thats sad . . but on the other hand brook you defintly took this alot of Envy's shit was played and the wordplay was definitly played . . just was feelin brooks verse more

I Already Edited This Poll
-Axe


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