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Dimez 10-16-03 07:42 PM

LMThis herb i'm battlein suffers from sexual deprivation/
That means both his dick and rhymes need elevatin/
He dont get no action so he has to masturbate/
^ BEAUTIFLLL LMAO
You wont create some hate but you might cause a mass debate/
It's about whether you planned to hand me this win on a plate/
OH NOOOO!!!!!
I use my record as bait, by takin it you've sealed your own fate/
You love every move i make, I can hear you scream "Yo L your great"/
As soon as this started your pride started to desintergrate/
^ umm I dont like it cuz u did 2 barz then a half bar....
6/0

overall

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DAARK

Bitch nigga like ur style..allow me ta count backwardz fa U / 321 LM ya fuckin' "cross-dressin" dayz are done / in dis rap shyt.. I conquer "nationz" aight / blast tha left side of ya lyrical "brain" so U can make shytz "right" / LM's weak vocab gat me thinkin' he don't warrant ma full force / spittin' bullshyt like dat imma make dis closet fag feel remorse...peep tha "source" / nigga U acceptin ma challenge brought me pure laughta' / but on tha flip side lemme attached dis 'scope' so I can make it a closed CHAPTER /


^ ok u seriously need to work on sturucture and everything else there is to work on, u have some good disses but the style just made me wanna go to another page and read sumthin better u kno... not hatin' jus ststin'

vote=LM


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