i have to agree with what most people are saying this made for a good read, you showed some nice vocab.......no point in writin out again whats been said.......keep it up....

can you hit this plz its gettin slept on....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=88249

if this is your first open mic then damn... keep up that good shit man.

Thanks for the comments everybody....keep them comin and check out my second ever open mic peice...It's called 'This is my life'.

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Yo LM this is startin to seem funny.... first the almost 8-mile, then I'm sorry Momma too?! It's alright man..... I guess....(smirk)

I never thought bout that either. I wrote this the mornin after me and my mom had an arguement. It was a bad one too. I wasnt thinkin of Cleanin out my closet at all. But once again your right. See what you can think of for my one called 'This is my life'.

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yea this was a real deep peice...flow was good...vocab was good also...content was real good and i really felt the emotion put into this peice...real nice drop..hope you work that shit out with you and your moms...keep dropping son...

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this wasnt anything like cleanin out my closet..... LM actually wants to save his relationship with his mom but em was basically saying "i never meant to hurt you, but i didnt deserve this: fuck you"... big difference

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