You still uppin' dis....... ya bwoy Funn ain't goin' nowhere so to let you know........

uppin'

like ppl have said their's alot of basic lines in here. not really tomuch complexity in this but it made for a good read. and again sorry for what happend bro. must be hell. peace.

and if ya got the time check out my collab with 2-Rich "40's, bongs, an bitchez (feat. Gene Pool)" and leave some feedback bro. thanx in advance peace.

It is hell. UPPIN

yea dat shit was tight fam....keep dat mind state an determination everytime u go to write an u'll be straight holla t me ONE

SDG

Thanks for the comments. Keep 'em comin

I think this was a lil 2 basic, and it sounds/seems like you got the concept from Eminem, cos he rapped about his girl n there probs n u look up2 him, so u decided to do one. Thats cool n all, but if u love her, why u dissin her? I thought some of the lines didn't flow fluently, but it was a good concept trust. I think if you were a lil more imaginative with ya vocab, it would of been a dope piece. No hatin' jus expressin my views, aight. Keep postin'.. Holla Peace

Nah I didnt copy eminem, I was just lettin my feelins out. I feel guilty bout postin this peice coz I care for her but I was extremely pissed off. I didnt wanna diss her and I'll be postin a verse up soon about her without dissin her to try and tone the whole situation down a bit. Thanks for your views tho

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Somebody plz close dis shyt already......damn 'cotton candy' lyricz anyhow.....*am not in da mood fa lovevydubby shyt right now*

^^^Fuck you....what right do you have to say shit like that, your probably just still pissed off coz I'm one of the three people who kicked your ass in frontlines. Fuckin herb. Cotton candy lyrics....haha thats what your verse was in our battle so shut the fuck up

yeah it was alright I think that the openings of both verses could have been a little more creative. Next time try to put in some more lyrical words like double-o seven said. But you did put your heart into it . I'll end my reply like this if I had to rate it 0 the worst and 10 the best I'd rate it 8.

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^^^^^^^^ aye yo....wat does LM stand for??.....Lyrikal Murder or Lame Mofo......hahaha.....dawg am not pissed at all.....I jus' did'nt like ya piece......stupid ass 'Brit Shit' lol