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Kasper 01-26-04 12:53 AM

i've slain ya hunches, had ya brain do crunches
what kinda asshole has to explain his punches
talk is soft, give u a beat down u cant walk it off
i cant believe i found sum1 wacker then bouncedoggydog
took a gang sign & thru it up, then went to do a slut
& gave the bitch LethalInjectionz..










& ya mom still spews the nut!

billy 01-26-04 01:08 AM

thats a verse? i couldnt understand a damn word
i dont know whats worse, your flowin or your grammar...
figured out he was wack and came up wit a solution...
"ta get better i'll join in january for my new years resolution"...
i'll take on champs and like fat people start rippin belts..
noone got what you were sayin and the astericks didnt help..

Kasper 01-26-04 01:26 AM

you meant that to dude above me, & i hate to burst
but lets hope ya birth.. wasnt as late as ya verse
like some wack shit, ya even noted it ya bitch
but u worse then the played shit ya quoted in ya sig
i blurt wit a charm to hurt & disarm
i can tell by ya name "billy".. ya work on a farm

Wielded Rage 01-26-04 02:16 AM

sry kas, man its all in fun~
 
Kasper go ahead ask her, im sure she'll say no. |1|
Ya dicks like negitivve 3 inches and ya got whack flow. |2|
Dang man im sorry that was a "low" blow. |3|
Ya,Jail cell bud nasty nate said he loved ya, yo. |4|
He said he hates every bone in your body but his |5|
jeez? Damn man thats really freaking sick. |6|
I cant believe you like another mans dick. |7|
we'll I guess i'll end it with that well writ ill shit.|8|

Kasper 01-26-04 02:31 AM

killlllllllin ya...

everyone expect the worst, ya'll kno you'll get tore & hurt
its obvious u knew it.. he said sorry even before his verse
you the first to get choked when i burst & go loke
said its all in good fun.. explains why i took ya verse for a joke
im rippin wit ease bitch, i'd say straight but ya cant be this
cuz u spent ur whole verse.. showin obsession for my penis
ur bumblin mind just provin ur dumb within the rhymes
& you needed help wit math.. so ya mom numbered all ya lines
ever get out & wonder, how to count ya dumb herb
your post was odd as hell.. & i aint talkin the amount of numbers
you'll get banished bitch, try to stop it but cant manage it
cuz Kas took out Weilded Rage..



..like Anger Management!

Wielded Rage 01-26-04 02:56 AM

Nice..keep spittin
 
heh, ya think youre slick dont ya bitch, was it not for kicks?
shit, I aint got to number my spit,you prolly couldnt find a gurls clit.
Man I'll beat ya with a fuck'in sledge, dust ya with some pledge.
Wipe ya gutz ta da edge. elbow drop ya from the highest possible ledge.
one of many dire situations,you prolly leave in a gay's constellation.
you act like were fighting fo gold, ya neve'a gonna make with rhymes that old.

manage it .. and .. Anger Management ...

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 01-26-04 04:06 AM

Wielded Rage sucks, man I had to compliment hi8m before
But I found the right thread to call hima whore
Thi8s kids career will never take off, like a bird wit no wings
Kid can't rap cant dance and my balls hurt when he sings
Haha I love cypher cause I can spit whack and not care
Beef with me We'll do it in FL or out herr

Dregun 01-26-04 06:25 AM

Damn lyric 90% of yo lyrics is pathetic, nah more like a fuckn joke/
bet you couldnt do a decent line even if yo moms supplied the coke/
you mention yah balls but son I dont think yers have dropped yet/
because with my nuts on yo chin thats the only time your spits wet/
Im only clown'n you boy no need to call your pops for some backup/
I already killed you with a watch and now its time for you to pack up/

VanIllabymidnite 01-26-04 07:43 AM

Dregun what the fuck is all that shit about..
Your rappin but all your shit is full of doubt..
Pout like a girl cause your ass is a bitch..
Talkin shit but then your ass pulls a switch..
Ditch what you say cause your newer than new..
God damn kid you just started out and your threw..

Dregun 01-26-04 08:37 AM

Vans ryhmes are like stinky pussy, they both dont make much cents/
yet hes talkn bout me bein newer then new when his style lacks substance/
Your spits are drier then tha sehara, why the fuck you trying to come at me/
I could mulitply you by 2 and you still wouldnt have enough balls to scratch G/
Fuck playn with bitches who still stuck on they period.. dumb fuck has no clue/
your the only motherfucker whos usin them and your still not going to get a W/
Van talkn bout pull'n switches when the biggest switch was in his mouth/
cuz after I got done gettin head from him his dad flipped him over and went south/
6 bar minimum son but after the first 2 you were threw/
now get off my dick before I waste more time fuckn you/

LM 01-26-04 08:38 AM

Aint done this for a while...

^^Who the fuck are you, got no dope rhymes
Only good bit is the ... at the end of your lines
All the times n00bs come here tryin to write
Fuck 'em all, all of 'em are completely shite
Rock you with spite, coz you deserve to die
Only time you winnin is by a fuckin dick ride...

LethalNJectionz 01-26-04 10:12 AM

What The Hell LM, You Think You Can Diss Peeps...|
Ima Leave You Like A Hospital Heart Rate Machine *BEEP*...||
I'll Kill Your Ass In An iNStANt And Won't Even Try...|*
Watchin' Channel '49', Dissin You While I Watch Family Guy...||** and ***
Ima Look In A Mirror, But I Actually Know Who I Am...|****
I'm From U.S., And You Live In The Promised Land...||*****
Cause Ima Bout To Show You A Turnin Point...|******
This Is It, Im Finish Dissin LM, I've Already Poped His Joints...||

* - check sig...
** - add his battle records =49...
*** - family guy is on cartoon network which is channel 49 here...
**** - check sig...
***** - check location...
****** - check sig...

menolin 01-26-04 05:47 PM

what the fuck is with the structure, you take it too serious,
reading you 6 lines an explanations, levaes you delirious,
this kid cant even sum up, not evan realized his wack yet,
look at his custom title..................
.........................directed towards hiself thats disrespect
the only time you drop dope, is when your pot rocks fall out,
he got wins, i give him a loss, to shut his fuckin mouth!!

AFI_KILLS_RAP 01-26-04 06:01 PM

You smell liek bitch ass sausages.. and smell liek them too..
look at you.. ur obssesed with honey. ya fuckin winnie the pooh..
what you have heard is true i liek to eat peoples poo.
you from the UK they suck..
i raped ur mom for a buck.. drive a truck...
ur Avy is Calvin and hobbes.. grow up son
get a gun... and run... HOW FUN...

Dev 01-26-04 06:21 PM

i rep the uk aswell... so ya got no leg stand on
both beat your skillz with 1 punch... neither of them a hard one
so crawl back under ya rock... do us all a favour
cos tryna punch playing cartoons... is like an ewok against vader
shit, i made a reference... im contradicting my flack
after that verse ya dropped its true... Afi_kills_rap
...well if ya can call that pitance that!

spittinkilla 01-26-04 07:50 PM

sorry man i don't rep the UK, i'm a peacekeepin canadian,
usually that is but today i'ma be invadin....
your verse up top... it was an aight drop, till it got to the star wars shit,
then it started to flop, but if ya got a minute i can give you a lesson,
just read this a few times it'll be a true blessin.
the effort goin into this is minimum...not much at all,
but i'm still on top da pedistol and man i ain't gonna fall.

Fl~O~mEtRy 01-26-04 08:17 PM

canada is cool, but then they had you//
ay, how u doin, by the way, the "maple" is gay//
but really, u just give it that rep thas been-bad//
that u cant "leaf" the board alone like crabs//
STD can u-c-me, nah ur 2 blind//
u cant c that ur a nerd neva on da grind//

wuteva

deeni 01-27-04 12:21 AM

Come on homie i know mute cats that spit bars harder then yours,
You be suckin the mic so much its leavin your mouth wit cold saws,
rappin wit shit in your draws, your dudu, fuckin soft like tofu,
I'll show you how to do this son, jack you for all your funds,
dont give a fuck if your only stackin ones,
dont need no gun cuz your sweet like a cinnabon,
rippin you just aint no fun, i do it cuz i was provoked,
like a fat rolled blunt you jus got smoked!!

Wielded Rage 01-27-04 12:41 AM

Deeni, Rhymes plan lame ta' see
Merrily makin mockin’s of you’re misery
Da' blunt provoked smoke, ya words choked.
Free flowing about fecal matt'a, man shuddup.
Decrepit rhymes!,I outa make ya Brain splatt'a
Cleftaphiliac...Youre atraccted to a mere crack?

cutastraphe 01-27-04 03:21 AM

sorry i had to deal this fate, i herd of "anger management" but weilded rage?/
i'll step out the cypha, but not even with weathermen-wuld they be feelin cage/
that's the steel cage we battle in, like wrestlers did it before/
but that's why i'm just dissin u, a loss? i didn't wanna stretch ya score/
if u define illness, then david spade must have muscles/
trust ya dun't wanna tussle, cuz i don't fuck round-and culd still run and shuffle/
culd bust a flow, again and again, where are you from?
ya lyrics like people on planet earth-i'm sick of the scum/

Sol-loK 01-27-04 05:01 AM

this fool is gay he works at GAP for a livin \
but his words is whack and it seems his mind is missing \
shit, the simple fact that he's rappin is a catastrophe \
i'd bet odds this cat never won his school's spelling bee.. \
talkin bout david spade, man you joe dirt, you so soft \
we should throw people like him in a camp and start a Whackness Holocaust \

:thefinger

Dev 01-27-04 08:24 AM

whats this with newbies... signing, thinkin the're what their not
with the played lines... like a hedrix encore at woodstock
cos ya skills stop at elementary... like ya hit the red light
instead of changing to green... its shorted out and stuck for life
so Sol-lok, go fuck off... piss off back to sacramento
cos ya skiilz that bad... on a gauge it, would be way below zero

deeni 01-27-04 10:12 AM

Talkin bout played lines, your rhymes are played out,
like razors in the mouth, you couldn't cut it,
parents must be regretin havin a kid, cuz look what there stuck wit,
stick to havin your tea and crumpets, and bein a puppet,
cuz that aint you, your parents raised you better then that,
they told you the consequences if you try to rap,
that niggas like me will eat you for a snack,
spit you out, show you what battlins all about....

*TechnitioN* 01-27-04 11:54 AM

...Who? Deeni...you aint magical so stop with the lies-and-fronts...
i'll slice your intestines, grind them, then shove 'um inside-my-blunts/
i heard you ride-on-nuts, no wonder this herbs-raw...
claim your an alcoholic cuz you poundin SMIRNOFFS!/
2 barz just killed you, so let me proceed with your casket...
while tossin my eggs in your mouth like an easter basket/
little faggot, your a rookie tryin to diss on a veteran...
i'll hit you so hard you'll leak marrow from your skeleton/
so think about what your doing, cuz your rhymes aint lovely...
this is the first time i've ever had a faggot above me!/

IceMan187 01-27-04 01:19 PM

yo technition ,gettin no recognition
i get on the record, dissin christians
slicin intestines? youll end up missin
you dont fuc wit me like a cobra hissin
you beatin iceman, an impossible mission
burn you up, have you in critical conditions
throw you to the ground, have u in full submission

ELEETE 01-27-04 01:47 PM

What? Iceman? Yea right man!//
You betta off cuttin yo connection to lifespan//
Witta knife, that'll chip away at the Ice//
Or just get rid of you quicker with heat related device//
You say you freezin' em up, but its you that is stuck//
mothafucka cant you see that its you that just sucks?//
What you think you an X-Man? You aint a X-Man//
Bitch you just a regular wack bitch like tha next man//
That's bout to spit wack shit to my name//
Fuck it we all here to entertain....its all just part of the game//
Peace..........

FlowDro 01-27-04 02:38 PM

Eleete i think you have to go back to elementary school,
to spell your wack ass user name, cuz your an illiterate fool,
You jerk off to ken from streetfighter, cuz your straight up a fag,
your punches don't hit, and your flows just lag,
"Stay true to yourself" bitch don't try to sound deep,
After your done battling me, youll enter into an eternal sleep,
Your from the Bay Area, well i figured that much,
I knew this bitch was flaming, he turns things gay by the touch,
Eleete im not trying to start beef, just following the lyrical topic,
I knew my flow would rip you, before i even dropped it

Born To Kill 01-27-04 03:53 PM

I'm itchin for a battle but ain't a challenge in sight, yo...
So I've come down ta Cypher, and it's here I found FlowDro.
Soundin like a track bitch, runnin circles, this pussy's dizzy...
But always gets left behind, cuz even runnin he don't get busy.
He's so lame he's stank, odor trailing like pied piper mice...
It's tha only followin he'll ever have, so clean ya act, that's my advice!

ELEETE 01-27-04 04:23 PM

^^^Nice one FlowDro^^^
Oh no! Here we go! Who the fuck is FlowDro?//
You sound like a fuckin Pokemon Bro!//
One soundin like crap whos wack an Raps slow//
An the the only thing that comes out of his mouth is " Flow, Flow"//
You stepped up to ELEETE?.....thats No, No//
Face it you ho....step off the Mic an go home..................//

Nice One Born....As Always.....

bouncedoggydog 01-27-04 06:28 PM

Not another commercial rap cat... Known to RB as Whack Crap...
My lines do to foe's... What a "D" does prefixed to Yo's...
"D"ELEETE these Herbs Row by Row... Heating gay-text to glow...
Like fag's... Ya probably want to -Cum On Back- and Bust loads of Whack...
Be my guest, post rhymes by stacks... Ya still find ya lines just lack...
No beef, just bored... But fact remains by my rhymes you're whored...

...

(Again you guy's are doing a good job at keeping this forum clean, keep up the effort, it really makes a difference. Thanks to all)
~Bounce~

FaTaL_LyRiKzZ 01-27-04 06:36 PM

1,578 Posts Prolly Was All Spam\\
He Not A Virgin His Secret Is Dat Michael Jackson Took Him *FIRST*HAND\\
Me Killin You In A Cypher Is Already Planned\\
You Bored Well Go back To Kissin Asses\\
I Cant Understand Ya Gibberrish Get Back On To Speech Classes\\


Alright RB, since this kid was ignorant enough to post a diss well under the line limits, aimed at me and conprised of crap. I say we put him in his place... The next (after my post) 3 cats in here, drop some heat on his ass. Go ahead diss the crap out of him, next time he'll post the right amount of lines... If not we'll do this again, it's much more entertaining than just banning him...

~Bounce~

bouncedoggydog 01-27-04 07:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by FaTaL_LyRiKzZ
1,578 Posts Prolly Was All Spam\\
He Not A Virgin His Secret Is Dat Michael Jackson Took Him *FIRST*HAND\\
Me Killin You In A Cypher Is Already Planned\\
You Bored Well Go back To Kissin Asses\\
I Cant Understand Ya Gibberrish Get Back On To Speech Classes\\



Here's yet another display of ignorance... Your words, much like your life...
Bare Zero signifagence...
Referencing my post to Spam?... Were not you the one under limits man?...
Your just an "Herb"... We can describe your POSTS with just one descriptive "Verb"...
You said it yourself... "I can't understand"... If my back-hand were Knowledge I bet SMARTS... still wouldn't land...
Minus a punch I still bitch slapped this punk... Ya talking gibberish while texting nothing but Junk...
So be gone with your whack-ass... Cuz to RB your nothing but laughs...


The next three cats to post under me, do me a favor a roast the cat above me. You will see why, get'em good, kids need to follow rules...

~Bounce~

P.S. you can still diss me after if you want...

Wielded Rage 01-27-04 08:22 PM

Wasup BOUNCE,
Talkin bout "herbs" that just a de-scribing word.
My foot and you'll ass are bout ta be merged.
Ya just a mod-arator, outa' call you moda'-hater.
Youre style is whack, ya must smoke crack?
Claim'ing ya got wit,shit you got the IQ of a monkeh's armpit
Lyircaly Loco, an ya home towns feeled with homo's.
Los angel-ies?, heard all da bitch's there stay on tha' knees.


Fatal,you so stoo-pid, ya still in da craddle?
I Heard you where pickin on bounce?...
I only didnt cause I just smoked an ounce.
You must work a mc'donals maken all beef paddies.
I seen you an geroge bush,in the back of 1'a fiff-ties caddies.
Sadly i must end this sheant,theres'a line limit,do as its meant.



:shoot: *ya crew*


Edit:Yo Bounce~ Can you please check out my suggestion, in the suggestion section ive had no response to it yet...THX.

Diallo 01-27-04 11:58 PM

wielded rage nigga ain't no shield from the gauge
I'll leave you feelin this page cause I'm killin this page
don't own no notebooks no need for this nigga to quote hooks
I'm leavin you hos shook like you was stealin a cold look
all you gettin is the cold shoulder followed by hot boulders
I mean I'm spittin hot rocks out the mouth of a hot glock
bustin this kid down from nickel store rhymin to pennies
test anger from this nigga I'll show you I got plenty
Hollow points to ya skull and I'm leavin ya brain empty
so pussy don't tempt me I'll smack you up like a was Ike
You just tina to me I'm that nigga that ya ho likes
with cold spike and sharp knifes I'm drillin into ya heart
so I'ma just finish this shit with fatalty before the beef starts....
just spittin cuz no hard feelins

VanIllabymidnite 01-28-04 04:23 AM

New to RB, to bad your stay is shortend so much..
Threw you out before you could say such and such..
Didn't ever hear a word you decided to say out loud..
Tried to shout in my ear, couldn't hear you from the out crowd..
Hold your head up high as your voted off the island..
Come back next week, like Ric Flair stylin and profilein..
Thrown over the top rope your feet hit the ground, out again..
Your friend tells you to stop your wrong done in, you doubt a friend..
Diallo, no offense, I'm gona make you headless, go back to Sleepy Hollow..
Everyone laughin at your ass like we was on showtime at the apollo..

Dev 01-28-04 10:25 AM

i see ya still here... ya drop like shakespear on crack
cos ya lines are a tragedy... that i smoke to relax
ya supposed to hit with might... not a just trickle
so i punch with power... but im met by a tickle
like the bite from a gum... you dont make much of an 'impression'
ya no 'Van Gogh'... come back, after a few lessons

Jo-JO 01-28-04 12:18 PM

Some with no skill claim they are old skill ill
No bitch your not the same, With an ovr written will
Think your well read cuz you watchd shakespear in love
With an interesting name like dev take off the glove
Your just jealous cuz someone has some sort of imagination
with no style or lyrical will wishing to be in the last generation

Kid Killa 01-28-04 02:41 PM

Look out it's Jo Jo's fat ass comin', oh no!
This is the only wack MC who ever stole a show
Literally, cause this hoe is the only thing u can see
Jo Jo was born for only one purpose: to target & eat
Jo Jo's like a hot air baloon: real wide and blowin' gas
You lucky this is Cypher cause in frontlines u won't last.

AFI_KILLS_RAP 01-28-04 03:44 PM

look out kid killa.. he is a kid killa.
taken to many drugs, ya guna die, so much for a thrilla.
You act black, aint lick sack, stab ya back.
stop eatin battling all these NewBs, its making you take poopies.
I have a computer oh yes... make me feel liek the best..
your flows are like my poop... THEY STINK...
and when i get home... ur ass is about to ink...
The color red, blood runnin. but its not the only thing thats cummin.
Hummin liek a bird... BITCH ASS TURD..
im bout to leave but thanks for the Burrito... i am guna go... to feed yo...

j-dilla 01-28-04 04:47 PM

This is sad, this kid needs to extend his vocabulary, see...
Bodily fluids and wack ass rhymes just dont cut it.
"take poosies" oopsies, i think he needed shit to rhyme NewBs.
No match so lets "rap" about cum, piss, and shit.
Your the worst emcee, Im practically embarassed for you,
You must be new, you have no crew, Mondo Thugs impeached you.
Lets call us the "Mondo Thugs" because we want to be Bone
Quotin' AFI on RB with no talent shown, hell what does this look like Rolling Stone?
We quote the Source, 106, and XXL.
Lookin' at what you write I feel my head start to swell.
Sickened sorrow, wow thats what your rhymes do to me.
If i saw you id make sure you were the one bleeding from YOUR face from my knee
Cause im sickened, im practically pleading while proceeding to finish this wack rhyme that you left me to follow.
Your rhyme has nothing going for it, your writting is just hollow.
___________

J-Dilla.

"Due process, payin these dues, battlin crews
At the same time, livin in life, givin enlightenment
Seeing eye for the blind
Through the darkness of the industry we ministry"
- Lone Catalyst


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