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Tonka 07-18-04 03:03 AM

Aight, yall didnt say how long the try out had to be... but yeah here niggaz... by the way I clicc'd Big Chase's link in his signature to get here...


One atomic bionic supersonic plutonic ionic brain
systemically mapped and not actually trapped
but free to the world that surrounds me
complex like socretes, angel of einstein watchin me
doors haven't open since I lost the key, inner dragon has come to me
strike with viscious precision invision deep incisions listen for the
molecule division, diabolical so listen
rhymes tight, to leave you imprisoned
deep in depths of unchartered parts, and scard marks
of the mind in the dark, my lyrics flame with even the slightest spark

Recluse 07-18-04 11:46 AM

^get a better flow and elevate........uppin for more tryoutz

La Cosa Nostra 07-18-04 11:54 AM

http://img6.exs.cx/img6/3456/triggamatrix.gif
said 2 make u a personal sig...
did u want this or sumthin else.. if so, what do ya want on it?

Recluse 07-18-04 11:55 AM

naw cuz i forgot to tell you what i want on it......is that okay .....can i tell you what i want on it

Recluse 07-18-04 11:57 AM

sin you make great sigs so when we get our sub forum you can make your own sig shop like everybody else does...

La Cosa Nostra 07-18-04 11:59 AM

no probs.. im goin 2 sleep pretty soon but PM me what u want in here and ill whip one up for ya tomoz bro.

should be battlin some kid schema tomorro too.. lol he wanted to do it tomorro so he could pre-write most likly.. doesent phase me.

Recluse 07-18-04 12:03 PM

aight bro.............uppin for more tryoutz

halob 07-18-04 12:17 PM

i am beet fake mc to the beat of insturmentals/
my killin spreace arnt thought of, my damented mine is mental/
so when i battlin you better beware/
half of these's mc are fake, to win aginst me thats going to be rare/
i am elavating on this site so i ant gonna take no shit/
i act stupid so i wont have to show them my own wit/
so i think i ready to be down with this crew and try to be a vet/
i will show me talent,and win some battle before i am all set/
your probly think that i have some wack ass lines/
all the times and rhyms that i put in a crew i need to be in this crew/

halob 07-18-04 12:19 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116201
ya look at this

Recluse 07-18-04 02:19 PM

^get more wins....and get a better structure....then come back and we will talk........uppin for more tryoutz

uzi 07-18-04 02:29 PM

whats up Trigga i found the site....werd tho haha well do i have to tryout

Keith Moon 07-18-04 03:04 PM

yes yo do....wen hes not here i take over....so spit.......

Recluse 07-18-04 03:07 PM

^cool down there bigchase.....umm uzi no you don't have to tryout cuz i know what you got and your some sick shit so no....but if you want to then go ahead......bigchase good looking out bro........uzi in

Keith Moon 07-18-04 03:10 PM

ooo okay.......ithought he was new man.......im calm tho.............ill help ya run dis shit.......

Keith Moon 07-18-04 03:11 PM

ooo okay.......ithought he was new man.......im calm tho.............ill help ya run dis shit.......














uppin

Recluse 07-18-04 03:13 PM

<-Lyrical Virus->roster
TRIGGA
bigchase
sin
smartzz
blades
Met-Ah-Four
uzi

Tonka 07-18-04 06:25 PM

Hmmm... can yall help me out then. If I got no one to teach me then how can I learn...... but hold up, is this a text crew, cuz if i spit that out loud it sounds good for flow... I dont know... text niggaz know how to write though.. so i was wonderin if yall can help me out.

Keith Moon 07-18-04 06:28 PM

hmhmhmm
treyout.......and ill try to help ya from there.....

Tonka 07-18-04 06:32 PM

Cuz I just started rap 5 months ago... on and off
Now, imma go straight on about it.

Keith Moon 07-18-04 06:41 PM

okay....ive been rappin less and im dope........

Keith Moon 07-18-04 07:20 PM

tryout plz fam.....comeon holla....preach.....

Keith Moon 07-18-04 09:11 PM

uppin plz

Tonka 07-18-04 09:54 PM

(Posting in Sub Forum Tryoutz)

Hmm... how about that....itz diffrent I think it flow better while reading. Yeah you probably better then me cuz i never did text before i just did lil cyphers here and there.

Keith Moon 07-19-04 12:27 AM

hmmmm iono Trigga.......

Tonka 07-19-04 02:33 AM

Yeah, Going to sub forum....

DaReTuRn 07-19-04 03:49 AM

this is my debut for which im long overdue
no need to reveiw im here to come through

i make niggas become beleivers threw my rhymes
while their chicks blow me more then wind chimes

i left the throwbacks shaking with a heart attack
you skip a beat and your fucked worse then iraq

Desmoloshing these weak rappers verses worse then m&m
stemulating your body like cancer befor it hits your brain stem

leaving fake ass wannab emcees looking like the red sea
i garantee il suceed with everything your can thow at me

DaReTuRn 07-19-04 03:50 AM

theirs my tryout i know im new but im active alot so give me a chance or atleast some feedback

Recluse 07-19-04 11:15 AM

with work you will get better.....i'll give you a chance welcome .......okay now everybody report to our new sub forum

harlequin 07-23-04 01:44 PM

I'll be droppin somthin for ya soon

harlequin 07-23-04 01:45 PM

I'm still workin on it

Tha~Pro.DiGy 07-23-04 02:13 PM

yo check out mah stuff in freeagents

Keith Moon 07-23-04 02:13 PM

wait didnt ya used 2 be in D2R???????

Keith Moon 07-23-04 02:14 PM

aint ya ctually prdigy the person from D2R

flow2crazy 07-24-04 05:23 PM

Heres my tryout...

Im not Santana but ill bring the Jewelz(Juelz)...
Im not the paper boy but ill bring the news...
Just sit down unless u ready to lose...
I came here to collect my dues...
I bust shots n leave ur white t lookin like a jersey...
Im like the orkin man eradicatin the pest...
When my rounds r empty ull b left wit out a chest...
Itll make the mortician sick and the athiest think hes blessed...
Nuthin can protect u from me not even a vest...
Ive finally emerged, the one they call the best...
So step down or be defeated like the rest...

check out my open mic 2

Kintaro 07-24-04 06:37 PM

iight... checkin in. trigga you already peeped my shit but i'll spit again if you want me to?

Recluse 07-24-04 07:26 PM

go check in our sub crew fourm

Recluse 07-24-04 07:28 PM

click the link in my sig

white night 07-28-04 03:06 PM

this is the white night, outa site
if you wanna get with me just holla tonight
you know i'm tight, i bring light
to all the darkest situations, damn right
i'll be on every radio station,
i'm so good, i spit rhymes in my sleep
make you weep, to your mom who's a creep
come and get me, catch me if you can
goin 93, all the way across japan
runnin circles 'round your house, laughin in yo face
makin u cry, with my bottle of mace
i'm too fast, too furious for you
i hope you know what your getting yourself into
khuz u noe u gonn lose to me, can't you see
i'm not one of these rednecks from tenesse
i'm the happenist playa, you've ever seeen
i spit mean rhymes like some kinda machine
this isn't it, i've just begun
i'll make you run home back to ure mum
if you want me, come nd get some
i'll be here all week, puncturing ure rectum
if you think yoself to be some kinda... cool guy
i'm here to put a stop to you... and that lie
loved by few, hated by many
respected by all, and that is plenty
people always tellin me be real friendly
and people will be nice to you like mr. bently
but i aint into that, true pimps are cruel
there's a true pimp, standin right in front of you
if you think you betta, stop actin a fool
khuz u noe i'll make yo mouth drool
no, not with spit.. but with blood
khuz i'm the only one spittin spit in the hood
i'll take you to the top, homies gotta stop
bow down in front of me and i'll hit u with a block
when things are dark, i make 'em bright
when there's nothin there i, show the light
when things are bad, i make 'em tight
do you know why? khuz i'm the white night

Abraxas 07-28-04 03:14 PM

WhiteNight:
Nice, But i think you need more elevating..
I'm not sure... Probably not...
I'm not the head of Lyrical Virus...
I'll let the others decide...

Keith Moon 07-28-04 03:17 PM

he needs too elevate a lil........


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