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Mj...keep building... you need a lot of work... *whoa!*... uhhh... get some wins... elevate some more... and try out again at another time... don't give up!
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yeh im feelin that.he got sum gud metas,diff style but he coo.......
I`LL PUT HIM IN.... the roster MANIPULATION DANGEROUSMYNDLUNATIC FLUIDMOON MENTAL MURDEROUS ILL-GRAMMATIX RED BULL ALBATROSS we need 1 more to get a forum..............uppin them tryouts. |
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pp
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Last spot...c'mon..sum1 (Ill) with the (Grammatix)...lol
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aiight fluidmoons out........so we need another 2..................
uppin |
tryouts maybe??????????????????????????????????????????
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so thats a no lol
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i`m password. I'll try and get the forum. |
we only got 6?....................
we need 8 dnt we |
yo... why fluid bounce?
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manip what did u think of me?
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VS trooper in LCB:
the only wars you've caused is no worse than bites from a mosquito// funny though...it's more bloods than lines the way this pussy flows// you disappoint me...you'll fail like the very last group of kakistocracy// war addict...i take aversion seriously, like the American Democracy// how he lost three games remains mystery...like his deadly tendenciez// kid's missing...fell through cyberspace faster than sitcom industries// kid's shit for brains...Da Vinci has started your own suicidal fame// bitch look like he gets around...too bad he was never in this game// cat's got no inner-strength...frankly we all knew you were terrible// close fight with ArchAngel's one thing...but this is unacceptable// "fuck you pay me", his misleading slogan to confront Kerry and GB// guy's put his life to the risk, and his lack of proficience is amazing// fluked into the army...by Arabian monkeys in cadets was you molested// kid's been tested...it's your aiming skills that can't be manifested// this is the only verse i can find, i'd like feedback on this Plz, holla at me through PM if i can be in |
ALL yall sighn to ABB we bout to take over E-A-SKI young one more to come we gone have a fucken army who gon be wit it.
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plutonium i liked ur verse.sum nice complexity in ya vocab.........very good flow,
nice multies........ only thing id say negative is maybe ur punches maybe were a lil soft. by that i mean i felt sum of ur lines were tryin too much on vocab n complexity n maybe lacked a lil kick. overall though i did like it a lot..........so u def in........ roster MANIPULATION DANGEROUSMYNDLUNTIC ILL-GRAMMATIX RED BULL ALBATROSS MENTAL MURDEROUS PLUTONIUM uppin 4 one gud tryout only 1 more person needed...... |
oh sorry.........
mjgreen.u had gud structure and flow, ok vocab......... basics were solid........ but ass i said ur rhymes were not hard......i wanna see a battle verse or a diss... feel free to holla back wit sumthin harder if u want.... but i felt u wernt as gud as the others on the roster....but hey holla back n prove me wrong peace... ill grammatix.fluid bouncd coz she thought she was joinin a "better" crew i think.i dunno,but woteva we still cool so....... |
iight im back again....
take my open mic as a tryout...hope its better..........y'all lemme know peace link below |
ok Mental Murderous is out now......tryin 4 other crews n e way....
fuck him.from wot ive seen of him,hes an ignorant shit n e way...... ima put u in yyvone cos i know u cool.n aint no crew jumper.. aiight u on tha roster.......... 1 more needed uppin.. |
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i'm an ignorant shit.. because i left this crew :( you`re gonna put him in cos you want your crew forum.. you aint serious.. this crew wont last.. lol .. your mad because i left this crew.. can you blaim me? how long did i join. & lmfao @ ya fake pic's... i messaged that gurl from liverpool.. and she said she has no idea what i`m talking about. |
nah im puttin HER in coz i know she cool...that counts for summert,u need members that gonna stay 4 a lil while at least.......
spose i was mad u left tha crew....but its like wots the point of sayin u gon b in,then jump b4 the forums even up....woteva n e way. as 4 the pics......why talk shit????.......wow, wot cos sumone says they fake n u jump on there dick?....very intelligent........ |
I was told to come here by Manipulation................Im down fo da crew holla back
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oooopppppps......^^^real sorry dawg....i thought u were sumone else......
drop a tryout by all means.but i cnt put u in. sorry man,,,my bad. |
i'm rippin' blazin' viet for fun i don't need rewrds, so fuck-prizes
until i met this bitch i didn't know they made negative cup-sizes!(lol) this dude is played; reciting recycled lines shows this viet-lost i always "pay for what i break", so how much does your neck-COST?! you ain't no murderer man, this dude-will-lie cuz you killed NOBODY, that means you "commited suicide"(think!) stupid bitch, you tryin' too hard, this is a battle-of-wits your creative juices ain't workin' they always 'call-in-sick' i don't wanna hear your constand babbling, your talk-is-just-soft we must be battlin' in dodger stadium, cuz this is just a walk-in-the-park |
Yeah i know you saw that KO manipulation lol and that wasnt my best........ill try out hold up......
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damn you are a newbie gettin ready to get smashed,
i knew i was goin to KO you even before we clashed, should have thought about what you did you responded too fast, homie dont even know what biting is, only was he gonna win this battle is if is cut and paste's point and cliks and uses my shit, cause im too dope to lose and my rhymes are too clean, only way he gonna feel dope is if he touches my rhyme on the screen, he claim he a soulja but he fake like saleen, but he dont know im the real solja, im to good to lose my name should have told ya, with that christ you walk beside you still cant be a winner, cause im that christ you cant beat me you tha sinner.....................................I KO'd christsidesoulja wit dis..........Peayce |
hmmmm...i say it was ok... definitely need to fix the structure and come up with some wittier lines... ya styles more direct so kats on this site is gonna herb you cuz you don't use a lot of metaphors... show us what you can do with some metaphors... don't have to be a battle.... just drop some ill shit
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Im so dope you can get high off readin my rhymes,
and if you wanna get higher youll read it twice, and the shit around my neck is colder than cold its dry ice, you touch it you lose a limb foot or a leg, be walkin around wit a wooden peg, crutch or a cain, im so blinged out if you see it you go insane, iced out through ya eyes and straight to ya brain, you lose ya memory and forget you were lame, so you want meta's?, then my rhymes are like *lettus*, everybody has to have a bite, im out of site like a *fettish*, as my lyrics grow like a mold, i go from flat broke to slappin a hoe, cause they dont do what they told, my fingas to cold to stop typin, and to bold to start prerighting, so you want wittie?, slap a bitch fuck a hoe grab a tittie, sleep wit a under age girl move to a new city, and you tell me to come wit some multies....ok, as my verses and curses start to worsen, i bust caps wit lyricle gats i start burstin, im breakin glass and kickin ass im god forsaken, im worse than Vanilla Ice i eat rice and throw up that -pound of bacon-,.........Pound of bacon<vanilla ice used it in "ice ice baby" "cookin mcee's like a pound of bacon"......feel that or not tell me if im in.... peayce |
ohh iight im in...manip sis pm me when the forum is open
peace |
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LMAO....yo, homie is wild as shyt... ^^^dude quoted Vanilla Ice!!!!^^^ Yo Manip, what you think?... I'm tickled pink!...lmao... <----- that's a joke right there... I ain't never been tickled pink, giddy, footloose and fancy-free, or none of that other faggoty shyt... no disrespect to all the homos on the site...lol |
yeh that wasnt good........
soory lyrical,but no thanx. peace |
didnt see lilnae`s tryout...
i asked her to join.so she in....... ok we got 8,so ima pm strobe 4 tha forum. roster MANIPULATION DANGEROUSMYNDLUNTIC ILL-GRAMMATIX RED BULL ALBATROSS PLUTONIUM YYVONE LILNAE2 forum should b coming.meanwhile keep them tryouts coming.... upp |
Peep my topicals in the tourney and in my sig...
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Okay Imma Tryout For This Shit ...
Ayo, If This Crew Was Supposed To Be I'll Than Shit Yall Be Lonley ... Hell I'll Put A Price Tag On Ma Ass It's Tha Only Way Yall Could Own~Me ... But Make No Mistake I'll Rep This Crew To Tha Fullest That I Can ... Yall Couldn't Get Near My Skill If You Were Touchin Me On Web~Cam ... But God Damn You Got Sum Fresh Talent Need One More Perhaps? ... Blaze Tha Mic Put This Try~Out Under Ma Shirt Cuz Its Under~Wraps ... Like Bread This Text Bin Toasted Words Like Radiators Man It's Heated ... Jus Call Me Ya GP Coz Readin My Work Peeps Youv'e Bin "Treated" ... Aight ... Get Back To Me ... |
flow think u need a lil work on ur topicals/.................
holla back with a battle link or verse. shackles......thought u were gud ur in. u on the roster.stay active uppin tryouts. |
Muh'Fucker, Katastrophe Is My Only KONCEPT..
If I Got Beef Wit A Nigguh I'll Beat The Shit Out Him At His Own CONCERT.. I'ma Keep Writin These Hot Rhymes Until My HANDS-HURT... ...I'm Tryin Out 4 This Crew For One Reazon...I Want Mani To Life Up Her SKIRT Baby I Can Make Ya 'FANTASY' Come True We Can Roll Around In The 'DURT'.. ...Naaaw, I'm Juss Fuckin Wit-Chu.. ..But On The Real, My Rhymes Are Sharper Than A SAMURAI SWORD... ..I Know I'ma Win Cause I'ma Choke You Wit The MICROPHONE CORD.. I Can Leave Ya Condition CRITICUL.. Not Signin Me Would Make U PITTIFUL.. I Really Dont Think Mani Wants Me 4 My Lyrics, She Know I'm Cute So Shes On The PULL... .........I Got Toys That'll Leave Your Clothes Stained Red Lookin Like The Jersey Of A CHICAGO BULL...!! I Got Talent, Maaan, There Aint No DENYIN... Whoever Said Shotta Aint Hot Must Be LYIN... Yo Mani!!..Sign Me Up, I'm Done TRYIN...!!! |
If It Was Upto Me ... I'd Say You Were In ... You Aight ...
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lol Thanx...
An The Reazon I Mentioned Mani So Much Is We Had A Battle n The Story Goes On From There.... But I Aint Bout To Start Explainin lol, So Check The Battle Thread... |
LoL ... It All Makes Sence Now ... I Was Startin To Get A Lil Worried With Yo' Fasination With Mani ... J/k ... Lol ...
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it was ok....................
structures off.......flows ok..... u got potential though........ u in. |
Yeah I Think Basically It Was Ya Structure That Let You Down ... Sort That Out ...
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makes us 2 now...lol
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