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Lyriclesolja 05-11-04 02:46 AM

Yo ima murda Krairo,
wit 75 pounds of explosive pirow,
and watch his body parts spray over a lake,
in the middle of the night as they splash and make wake,
as the wind makes his blood spray,
im worse than o.j.,
or on the sencond thought,
ill do what im taught,
and tie your body around a 50 pound rock,
and gag you with a sock,
so the sock blocks your screams,
and punch you in the face ten times so you face starts to bleed,
then break your legs....im misery,
and make them pegs.....im literraly,
then i push you over the side of the boat,
all because you thought you were dope,
and you better hope you dont float,
cause next time ill expload.

-untitled- 05-11-04 02:54 AM

Krairo that is sooooo wack:


your shits another exam paper failure//
gettin close to an f, you should start deliverin paper//
at your state a child could merk you down like the iraqi terrorist//
fuck uzi, i'l bomb yer ass with alphabetical shrapnel piercin your 'flamin lips'//
and wadafuck you talkin bout within 'your verse'//
trustin you to come up wid dat shit, you must be smokin 'pure herb'//
you need to use more verbs, no chance of elevatin wid that shit stuck on yer back//
stacks of hate mail comin from 'rb' cuz they realised you were from 'iraq'//

blackwell 05-11-04 06:28 AM

ya rhymes are so shit i can see why ya "untitled".. wit them rhymes u aint the type to be dealing wit guns n "rifles"... u keep losing ya battles in "cycles"... for halloween just show people ya rhymes n it will scare the shit outta them more than "micheal"//

Krairo 05-11-04 10:07 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/chrisncmusic.htm this is for u untitled just somthin I put together real quick u lucky I don't feel like doin nothin tonight.
Got my hair done and shit tight as hell but its hot so I'm out for a while

CueBall 05-11-04 10:17 PM

This kid's talkin bout his hair? What is E a ho?....
Im startin to wonder, He's even got purple glo...
Goin blo for blo...It's no match...unless he's on his knees...
wait....Take that back.....when he's takin anal beeds....
seriously...This kids...like 50' on weed.....wit fukd up seeds
I mean...who realy come's in cypher's an talks bout weave's?

Krairo 05-11-04 10:51 PM

Dont talk shit when u can't see pic of my fro/
I'd never think about weave and ain't never used it before/
u prob got a microscopic meat small like in scary move/
u take back shot some more your still moanin dew me/
I don't fuck men so do what u do/
if it was up to me I'd just put a bullet in u/
what kind of man talks about another mans hair/
espically when u ain't got no evidence u gettin feminine there/
gosspin in public u if got a pussy then show it/
everyone watchout this Cueball might be a transvestive and not even know it/
be a man and don't talk about another usin weave/
if u got evidence then its best to believe/
since u ain't I'd shut the fuck up u don't wanna piss me off/
u might get embarrassed like in soul plane wit johnny law/

CueBall 05-11-04 10:56 PM

Check this herb...Sum one get em a tissue....
I ripped on his Hair...check this Bitch's got issues....
Truth is....U could get Angry an drop a hundred more bars....
But ya shit's pointless....It's like Kia makin cars....
U suck, U blo...big deal..no weave...it's a nifty fro....
But the fact still remains'....Ur a pussy..witta purple Glo...bro...

Krairo 05-11-04 10:58 PM

umm get some fuckin classes bitch its obvious u can't see the glow is blue and the text is black so I guess u ran out of material since u wack

CueBall 05-11-04 11:02 PM

^Im so wack....but u's the one who can't battle back?....
How does it feel....to be lapped in rap by some one who aint black?
check it....ya spit's shit, I click'd the link...dawg u stink.....
An if ya glo's blue?....then I guess this backrounds pink.....
U think?...naw...u frontin, ur' pissed, cus Im makin u look dumb....
But shit....look at it this way....it's the net...no one really know's where u from...

Krairo 05-11-04 11:12 PM

when did I say where I'm from u lookin at my sig too hard dog and I just won my battle yesterday so that pretty much destroys your so called diss.

u damn right u wack u got a biggie wit a name like cueball/
sounds like a gay biker gettin pushed to tha wall/
u could never make me look dumb wit your mouth full of semen/
not my kids untitled's kids still gleamin/
your mouth like is a resturaunt that never closes/
over 1 million sold and your still not chokin/
don't come at me claimin your white/
I'm not a racist but I'll use that alright/
u a wanna be like B-Rad G from Malibu/
u fakes fill my life wit pleasure/
takin shit when your a light as a feather/
I'm just gonna say step a against me and that'll be the last thing u do/
I got more amunition than Lloyd Banks tryin to battle u/
setup a battle if u wanna see ok/
I keep a black glove incase I catch a case like OJ

CueBall 05-11-04 11:49 PM

Dawg...stop....them dashes..they make you look weak....
If wackness was censored..ya whole verse would be bleeps
It's shit you reak....Damn right B-Rad....Kid's gotta escalade
What can I say... rather be white...than talk about Fade's...
cus, face it ya Gay....you keep comin back...played lines like OJ....
Grow up.....an go dip your ball's in sum rogain.....

Tolerant Level 05-12-04 06:00 AM

this 'bitch is dead' i leave him 'stiched in threads' like a 'forum seaker'
u 'callin beakers' u bitch more then a slut on heat 'ballin metres'
i 'snap yah kind' ull be 'traped then lined' to be 'shot quik'
i do 'hot spits' and ur back 'cock shit' like yah mums 'skid marks'
'kids laugh' and levae u with a 'shattered view' 'scattered clue'
when i 'broke yah jaw' u had no 'hope of raw' i skoped yah core'
and u 'burnt to oblivious' u 'hurt the obvious' more then yah
'familys diseases'

Wordz AhGod 05-12-04 08:39 AM

ur mom aint never wanted you, thats the reason you unwritten/ plus I knocked out your baby teath, so its easy for your nasty spitting/ Im an alcoholic, Pissing were it lands/ quit stealing them lyrics from Boys to men/ and let vanilla ice know, you bitting his shit/ thats how you caught GangGreen just below your lips/ Im a dog, ask your mom were I sleep/ fuck it, you was born 9 month after she met me/ Ill back slap you like an ass with no form/ Im the big dick kid smakin you around like this was European porn/ couse you aint a rapper, you story teller who can't spell/ U should Know that the lord gave me talent, but Im artistic as Hell/

R*O*B*B* 05-12-04 08:48 AM

so ya gonna dislocate my organs
im readin ya rap and im feellin bordem
please dont record em'
u shouldnt of even of cum in this forum
i wish i never saw em'
so ya gonna leave me with a shattered view
u no wot FUCK YOU!!!!

EPIDEMYK 05-12-04 09:02 AM

dont u no u shouldnt fight wat you cant see/at the same time i'm battlin the first dislexic mc. Im in this cypher cuz i dont attract worthy mc's/So i decided just to diss the writer of that tom cruise movie.now i haven't battled in a while, and father time has recked me/and your name lacks more creativity than a hysterectomy.while im rippin out appendages/in high percentages/whack is irrelevant/but this is far more relevant/than any word ive used to develop this.

BostonLyricist 05-12-04 11:30 AM

selfesteem sucks
 
fuck it who eva above me

i dont bust from long range like most of you cowards//
id rather run up on you like the planes did the towers//
if this was hollywod i would be james bond you austin powers//
marry your moms and adopt you as my son//
and every time i nut in her make you lick out the cum//
skeet all over your homework with out changing the paper//
gun check you invite your grandma to the crib and make you rape her//
right before you climax close your dick up wit a stapler//
its all love pussy its not cause i hate cha//

boaty 05-12-04 12:17 PM

Aight, this one is at Boston Lyricist

Yous a sick bitch, wantin to be my dad and me your son?
Aight, Ill talk about your bitches. Shit, my bad, you aint never had one
Flippin up for Boston, you proud of yourself little man?
Ive seen better emcess come out of a Harvard library after a meetin with the Klan
You gettin beat by a rookie, man how does that feel?
Im gettin some experience but youre gettin fucked in this deal
You wanna skeet on some homework? You must've had some fucked up teachers
You mustve been at the football games gettin it up the ass with em under the bleachers
You think youre James Bond, well I guess its good to dream
That dude dont even rhyme, so wantin to be him is a stretch for you
My rhymes are too complex for you
I didnt want to have to this to you
But you tryin to rhyme is like ice-skatin uphill
Your rhymes are about as hard as a poem by Lauren Hill
Hope youve had enough, now dont break down and cry
You'll never be able to step to me and its up to you to find out why

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-12-04 03:57 PM

^^^da nigga rite above me

dunny in battles i done made plenty fall,dogg u'z a hater u envy all-
plus u 2 "old" da be net rappin ya'll dis dude "mixx mc" is really "24"-[his name]

u a star? dunn F all ya fame,you'll get "court"*caught* with a "tech" on ya brain-
i be tellin ya girl shut da "fuck up" alot da bitch still wtih me havin "sex on a plane"-

im sick u be like marv is wildin,everybody wanna see me spit even ya moms is browsin-
my RS crew da reason her pussy "hole" is bigger than da 1 "saddam" was found in-

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-12-04 04:12 PM

^^^^ rite ^^^^

yo Marvolous J u dont kno who u fuckin wit//
u musta mistaked the 2 on the 24 for the size of ur dick// ( 2 Inchs )

Fa real homie i whould have to say ur to old for da site//
im 12 this mo fuckaz 1009 and his vocab. still isint RIGHT//

The results of a diss what u said up there was 0 fine//
Yo nigga u wack da first line. didint even rHYME//

Yo dogg you tryna diss on me no nunna DAT//
u couldint even beat me if u was hittin me witta base ball BAT//

Yo u passed so many years of ur life sittin on the computer//
Remember da Vocab. well they will make a Specal TUTOR// (( cause ur vocab, yea ))

Dont eva try to diss me and exspect to get away//
Man marvolous u so wack it seems u joined in MAY//

albi 05-12-04 04:30 PM

Aint no denyin this dude got talent,
But i'd be lyin if i said... what he said was worth the cred,
God damnit, did that make any sense?
I'm almost as bad as this fucker, a fuckin nusense,
I dont meen to be prudent, but why is it all the peeps on this site are like "yow momma is sooooo.... fat"
yo, screw them!
I come on here and its like a get-a-way,
the only get-a-way I wanna c is his^ ass trampled against the free-way,
I piss on his ass like he's a beday and I couldnt reach the toilet,
YO I was desperate y'all I dont need to foil it!
He already looked like shit so its not like my urine spoiled it,
Hey MarvoulousJ, whats with the fuckin numbers?
I heard that u got ur last chick to fuck u in the ass - with cucumbers,
I aint sayin ur gay, I have no fuckin issues, I just wondered whats with the creamed tissues?
But yo, MJ, with all respect, at the end of the day u got a record of 15-8,
So, I say all this with absoulutely no hate,
and I aint dick riding here, I just dont like to diss or dismiss those who who can teach us,
I'm fed up of newbie preachers, rappin their asses like they a new form of fast talkin creatures, makin their own credit by dissin those higher, they need to start kissin some ass cus we on fia,
I aint no lier, I myself am only a newbie, but I dont go around screamin my amature ass to the scieling,
Yo, they must be dreaming, half of the fuckwits who rap here, so this shit is to all the head banging quears who aint he'a, this is to all the hypocrital synical and easily critical fuckers above, screw aiming my tongue at one, I'll spit it at of ya, with a minor exception to those who earned respect, I'll neglect the rest and piss all over ya!

boaty 05-12-04 05:19 PM

Aight, imma spit one for Alibi
*no hate or anything, youre just the one above me*

This bitch gonna talk about how hes being prudent?
Shit, imma start a school for the worlds worst rappers and youll be the only student
And yo dog, newbie preacher?
Lesson #1 - You already suck, youre better off stealin my rhymes, after all, now im your teacher
Lesson #2 - Dont start shit with another tired-rhymin MC...seeing yall rhyme together would make me feel bad to own a dictionary
Thats enough lessons for today, i think youre startin to learn
Now Ill just rhyme on you, and its natural for you to get beat, and since its me rhymin on you, it must be your turn
You have no rhymes, youve got no flow
I dont wanna confuse you too bad...so Ill spit against you slow
Bitch if rhymes were a girl Id have Carmen Electra
But youd have some ugly ass bitch that youd try to fuck and she still wouldnt let ya
Youre pathetic, i know, its sad
Ill just let this end with you lookin back on the dignity you couldve had

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-12-04 05:32 PM

ooo feedin off my bars' mixx?? okay...

my badd tho mixx not 24 dis individual's seven,im real busy but ima lind u a second-
hold up dogg u started rappin period in aprill 2004 so how u a lyrical legend????-

u not fukkin with me homo so back off a sec,be4 i come see u & snap off ya kneck-
mixx punk ass live in "jersey" so it was destined dat "kidd" just rap on da "net"-

in ya garbage ass raps how could u mention da kidd,homo u like men pingin ya ribs-
and i aint think i would eva see da worst bar till i saw ya name and dat shit in ya sig-

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-12-04 07:21 PM

Yo Marvolous j ill still rip ya bitch ass and what im NEW//
Yo i want Leathal n jection here so he can Inject so hott rhymes in YOU//

yo And why da fuck whould i feed off ya verse//
i mean yo u losein battle must be a damn curse//

If y wanna talk shit lets get this shit GOIN//
cause im lyrical Punchs and dogg im lyrical Flowin//
Man im way sicker den u cause my punchlines is GLOWIN//
And its ya dad dick dat ya gay ass is BLOWIN//

Man wit tha first to bars i Beleave marvolous got RIPPED//
Cause after my hole verse a peice of ur Skills will GEt CHIPPED//

Yo dogg u prolly a werid look fella lookin like a Lugi n 2 Eureopueins//
Yo that had a vote and they said ur da WORST RApper in QUEENZ//

Yea JErsey is where i Repesent nigga gotta problem//
To step on my turf vinman was first spiky was 2nd to let u kno i shot em'//

So dont come back wit weak ass fuckin shit//
cause yo ill make u leave tha website and u will never SPIT//

E Looch 05-12-04 10:05 PM

uh ohhhh


leave u wit mixxed emotions pillow between ya legs cryin on ya bed
had to close royal sickness tryouts after u posted in the thread
cant be seriuos postin between the juggernauts me an jay1009
put ya spine on a calender so maybe u can elevate in due time
spittin them blue flames you aint even close to gettin yellow
ill leave u 2+4 ft deep dont act tuff just stay a mellow fellow
or the eagle leave ya chest stained like a dirty dipset shirt
think you a mac when a phone sex line tought u how to flirt
ill leave u filled with more shell fragments then a brokin egg carton
reppin jersey so i guess u a wanna be net thug like kenyon martin

EPIDEMYK 05-13-04 08:15 AM

You Say You Throwin Royal Sikness But Its An Everyday Disease/
Maybe It's Mad Cow The Way You Talk Bull And Look For Beef.
You Couldnt Make Me Bow Down Even To An Ancient Relic/
And My Words Are Siker Than Sik Its A Whole Epidemyk.

Wordz AhGod 05-13-04 10:23 AM

yo, Epydemik got Syphlis, and plus he sportin lice/ bitch ass popin genetal warts in a courner with cream while he crys/ HIs rymes are clueless, like god when he created facial expressions on chinese people/ senier citizen soundin ass, turning red like a spicy dorito/ I riped his head off, flushed it down toilet like a dead fish/ next I flushed a fortune cookie givin this bitch nigga battling tips/ Steven Halwkins battled this bitch in his wheel chair, and called him below average/ pressed a botton on his Wheel man 3000 and it spat a this bitch/

Wordz AhGod 05-13-04 10:24 AM

shit up bitch
 
his avetar is garbage

and thats the bottom line, cause stone cold said so.

Krairo 05-13-04 04:03 PM

wow EyeDentdy needs alot of work and help if he thinks he's dissing or even rhyming.

EyeDentdy u need a new name/
I'll takeout your eye like u in a max payne game/
Rainbow Six snipers and constapated writers/
if obvious u'd have better luck a dissing if u where a biter/
yo shit was boring as hell and had no punchlines/
times up and I'm threw teachin rhymes/
your written work is a good as fast food line/
I see your new here but don't get ahead of yourself/
learn to rhyme and god damn get some help/
u and your subliminal punch lines and rhymes is a waste of time/
EyeDenty Proof don't make me laugh/
who would want a name like that its dead last/
no competition I've seen some good names in my past/
startover wit a new idenity I don't care if u rename yourself to infinity u still couldn't last/
Warning in your avatar is only for the weak/
while the strong are known to have u beatin your meat/
over lyrics that have been spit in the last week/
I'm tellin u now u ain't shit/
u could come wit a burner and still couldn't hit/
I'm like an assassain thats takin your life/
leavin my insignia on your pride worse a Jackson fuckin up twice/
I don't need a symbol to show my name/
actions speak louder than words and fame/
come at me even battle me it'll be a total upset/
I'd give u 2 days to write while I'm flyin a kite/(kite = a letter to someone in jail)
fo real tho battle me I wanna test your skills/
show me what u got like 50 signin shoe deals

-O- 05-13-04 05:40 PM

What the fuck was that, where the hell you been yo/
Oh yeah, stuck up on that nintendo/
Hoe, you fake little playschool bitch/
I know plenty ways, your mouth can make you rich/
fifty cent would get plenty bent, with u usin his pics/
Maybe not, he's used to bein loved by chicks/

quicki....

The Jett 05-13-04 05:55 PM

Chek...This herb's name looks like his lower Bod extremeties...
Open'd up...So much...Like pussy gettin fucked in since the 70's
Take my fist, an levitate....Im done wit grabing for my waste on waste...
I'll take ya taste...Ya hearing...and everything else attached to face,
Lyricly laced....Ur equivalence render's in wit Ace-of-Base.....
Waste of space, You couldn't beat me if I held down "<-Back-Space"

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-13-04 06:50 PM

^^lmaoooo whut da fukk was dat

u got 30 datz nothin duunny cuzz im da betta vet-
u got a wip? well be4 my niggaz take ya "car-son" u betta "jet"-

nigga i'll put 2 in ya fade till u in grave & start losin ya waves-
why da fukk did u spit in dis cypher? dogg u just ruined da page-
if i come da boston u betta ask "bin laden" if he got room in his cave-

The Jett 05-13-04 07:46 PM

Da sickest on dis site's a herbarian hermaphrodite....
Queens...yeh right....This kid took 50's life, an tried ta bite.
Thinkin u Ill, Rippin newb's an thinkin ya rep be Outta-Sight
While everyone else just Wish's ur parent's rubber 's were' tight
The royal sickness, a Higher Anarchy to societal Bitches...
But when it come to spittin....Marviless' is left in stitches....

Krairo 05-13-04 09:15 PM

-O- wtf was that man u really should have just saved that it sucked

O.o another pussy on the cyper tryin to express his personality
-O- u suck u couldn't even sell dimes on tha block wit u actin so timidly/
58 posts O.o wow you been here since May/
but u spittin on this thread just made this page gay/
I don't gotta use much gunplay wit u its obvious what u do/
post little remarks about my lyrical sparks/
I'll leave blood stains in yo T's stuck premantly marked like wit a barrel of starch/
I'll rock yo chains even if they made wit ya name/
I don't give a fuck if they said David Blane/
I'll show u my magic tricks wit my dissapearing clips/
have u beggin for mecry when 1 of my shells hit/
really u ain't worth a whole clip after the 1st shot is really just for laughs/
I'll have a shell tear through your face like a diamond threw glass/
u ain't never seen a magiciain that committed murder/
have a anomyous face in new york times sayin I told ya/

now thats a quicki don't come wit those little lines

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-13-04 09:53 PM

THIS ^^^ E LOOCH

Yo nigga when i spit ill have u n Marvo HIDE//
Uz a fuckin IMagret all u do is spit n DICK RIDE//

Yo really homie u think u da best u lil fuckin net thug//
Yo u and ya baby marvo Go home n give each otha a RUB//
while ya at dat u probly gon go have sex in da TUB//

Well im not gonna diss e looch cuz he natrul fag//
I mean really i seen dat line all i felt was to GAG//

E Looch 05-13-04 10:39 PM

i know u aint come at me out of order lil nikka


if u a lyrical legend everyone on earth must be deaf
but ima make ya bitch ass scream 911 like wyclef
Face It U Aint Hot,Just Half Baked Like Dave Chapelle
Let Yo Carcass Rot, Burnt An Shot In The Back Of A Chevelle
Mixxed Is Ready To Fall Again Like He Missed A Step
Throw My Pics In Your Face So You Can Really Picture-Death

boaty 05-14-04 11:41 AM

Alright E-Looch, I got you

Going after the Legends now, I feel bad for you son
Now Ive got a 100 problems, and yes bitch, youre one
Take on one, youre gonna take on six
And I aint just takin up for my dog Mixxed
Cause he aint gonna have a problem with you
You aint good enough to step to either of us, or the rest of our crew
Youve got like 800 posts so you think you can spit?
Youre about good enough for sucking dick, thats it

BostonLyricist 05-14-04 12:00 PM

i dont see it
 
wait ah minute//

mixxed mc i really dont undersatand//
all dem soilders on your team must be fans//
they dont even rap probably just sit in the stands//
put a bomb in your mouth till i get my demands//
no more faggots tryin to spit(hit me wit a bat? what the fuck was that shit//
this is cypher bitch not texin for lames//
the only reason you hot is cause every time you fuck your bitch your dick is in flames//
i see niccahs been tryin to tell you but no change//
like a riffle wit a scope with only a 2 foot range//
hopeless seriously you are one of the weakest mc's here by far//
look i killed you wit no metas or punches thats a damn shame//
your the emmit smith of rap just sit down and watch the game//

EPIDEMYK 05-14-04 12:02 PM

let me ask you a question, have you ever had skills cuz the proof is gone/you need to treat this diss like a gangbang, suck it up and move on.and honestly like off balance scales on golf courses ur skills just aint up to par/ud think my pen wore a condom tha way u suk and i fuk ur bars/ i bet if a battled you ud proboably be a no sho/ just judgin by that " i wanna idolize a fake mc" logo/dont be mad just cuz i messed wit u today/its just u tryin people wit 3 posts like u just joined today....bitch

EPIDEMYK 05-14-04 12:03 PM

this was 2 boaty

BostonLyricist 05-14-04 12:17 PM

finally
 
you just made the biggest mistake in your life//
besides tellin your pops you was gay and made your brother your wife//
im dangerous in ways you couldnt even imagine//
you just a bitch niccah searchin for a dream like alladin//
even if you was but naked on x you still couldnt bone jasmine//
testin the wrong god,the wrong soilder,the wrong mc//
killing you wouldnt be an epidemyc it would be bloody and messy//
murder your whole ckick like colours even boaty i mean betsy//
come on son you skilled but have the wrong motive/
you on my battle field and just stepped on an explosive//
its a bbq of the legends i have yall chared boiled and roasted//

eat on that bitch!


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