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Voted For: streetryda

street work on ur flow evenin out ur lines will help u alot multis and personals the battles all about personals use links or whatever even though ur flow wasnt very good u came more complex and ur opponent had a few corny lines
diabolic really good flow but ur vocab is way to simple lose the / and some of ur lines were uneven but ur structure was a lil better than ur opponents but i give it to ur opponent because most of ur punches were corny thats ok though ur rusty work on ur vocab and personals get more creative

This was feedback posted for Diabolic_aka_134
 

one word for both of you "elevate"

upppppin but umm this battle was from when we were both rusty and i was a newb when it was writen so take that in mind

Voted For: streetryda

streetryda got this becuz he had better punches and vocab..both came weak...diabolic had better flow and structure but thaz about it......both could of done better....streetryder..didnt see any personals..and dont put / at the end of your lines..overall this was pretty decent but i give this to street

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Voted For: streetryda

Your Best To lean back n get of my case
b4 i shake ur ass n make u go religeous like ma$e/1
N dont b mad n descriminate my race
cuz this white boy b the 1st to put u back in ur place/2
This dude think he gangsta wif a name like street ryda
the only thing he rydin in the streets is the gangstas he meets... n we know wat he does wif tha meat (HAHA)/3
You Aint no gangsta, u aint handlin shit
the only thing u handlin is a muh fucin door nob/4
u dont wanna fuc wit me gangsta kuz i mite be a crip
kuz fukin wif me mite get ur wrists slit/5
n dont b mad if i win u dont hav to cus
its only a battle dude y u gotta fuss/6
ur gettin ya crew nigga u got allota guts
i know ur niggas got guns but do u bust/7
fuck wif me ill bust ur nuts..like a chicken egg
the only thing i fuk wif is ur bitch while im gettin head
u get in the way imma leave u dead/8
after all the blood an gore u c why i had to bust ur jaw
that ur shit was wack n mine was mad raw/9
Youve only posted 11
Dont waste my time son ill send u directly to heaven/10
^^^^^^^^^^^^ U HAD FLOW "OK" PUNCHES NICE WORDPLAYS,,,,,,DIDNT SEE ANY PERSONALS,,,,,,,



you may be diabolic or 134 but bitch either way ill end up at ur front door/
moree beef to be spread ima take these gats and put you to the floor/
fuck with me now wait till im done i bring the pain so hard you'll be beggin me to stop/
dont keep siting there waiting for these bombs to drop/
you runnin on stock but i still run you on your block/
drop down im tucking glocks now one more pussy for me to beat/
and im not talkin bout under the bed sheets/
im talkin bout ur ass since you so diabolic/
watch out cuz you might see me be a killaholic/
i aint the type to be fuking round wit/
the only thing u beat is your stick to them porno flick/
bitch i you say fuck me why dont u fuck yourself/
bitch that way ull get more pussy/
push me and youll see that youll be the next one on my list/
i dont need these gats you gona be gone off one hit from the fists/
youll blown off one hit of the weed i fuk wit/
you still puttin shit on ur dick tryna get ur dog to suck it/
i feast on you beast on you im the one that shines/
im telling you dawg mess with me and ima end up commitin a crime/
put you in between the lines that are chalky white/
CSI crew gone be piking up pieces of you all night/
in spite of the fact your new i guess i gota stop being rude/
just remember i ryde these streets everyday dude/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCHES,,,,,NICE PERSONALS GOOD FLOW

V-STREET HE HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND NICE FLOW PLUS HE USED PERSONALS

DIABOLIC- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE,,,BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT,,,,,,,GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,"OK" PUNCHES DEY WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT BUT GOOD VERSE ANYWAY

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stressin the non explained vootes you all need to learn to or dont vote

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upppppppppppin lets get this peepd and voted on mayne!! peace~1

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

diabolic got this
it wz a close battl
believe dat
but diabolic came hard az hell wit some of da wittiest puns i saw on dis site

street, ya flow waz okay i guess, da finisher wuz tight, prolly the highlight of da battle
but for ovverrall consistency in da verse diabolic got diz
nice drop diabolic u gottttz my voteeeeeeeeeeeee

duno if ur guna let that slide.. but wateva.. uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

yeh ill let it slide only cuz i want this shit closed so idc about it right now...peace~1
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Voted For: streetryda

no doubt street ryda took all the catagoriez in the bag man,,,,,,,,,, fuk man u ripped up.......... diabolic wrk on srtuctre and flow man and improve ur vocab dawggg.............. no hate peace out

dune if your gona let that slide but its w/e idc im just hopin this gets closed soon uppin peace~1

Voted For: streetryda

even battle shit you both need work but streetryda came harder. i thought his punches were amusing.
diabolic you were the same only your punches didnt make any sense,
vote=streetryda