Newest member of da R.I.P., Xclusive, soon to be one of our audio geniuses....

fuck zig zag and vp or zag zig and pv lol

aight ima drop this coo its


bitch I take 3 min to load my gat/
and a couple more to make a track/
your like 10 u aint even got hair round yo nut sack/
just a faggot is wat u are/
when u came out tha closet u came out way to far/
runnin all over u for days/
only person u can have wins over are gays/
dog this shit will hurt if I swallow but what if I choked/
my neighbors callin the poilice on me cuz of tha faggot I smoked/1
man heres another win/
so thats another sin/
this is str8 from my brain/
im only half way insane/
u have an issue/
get a tissue/
and leave this site no one will miss u/

I used this on xclusive lemme know if its good or not pm me!! :thumbup:

and xclusive if u win ill respect u aight!

THUGLIFE...now that i know what you spited im not gonna try haha..

Was good wit u this yo boi Anamasity comin threw 2 try ou check this out

Ill have these niggas comin up wit punchlines 4 days/ and niggas battle against me winnin is like dumb kids makin A's/And im a quiet lil nigga but i set off alarm/The only way people can beat me is if they eat lucky charms/And when i use punchlines i dont need consentration/I kill niggas just to send they souls on long ass vacations/And when i let a kid know the deal they sometimes cry/My threats are more serious the p-Diddy tellin people 2 vote or die/And im from that fuckin naptown i aint from the souf/ the only shit these niggas spit is the salava out they mouf/I got some enemies on Rapverse and they wont my style/Because they know im a bigger problem then lil bow wow

Yeah, you got room to elevate, and i believe i can help you with that. Welcome to Da R.I.P.

ahh 4 real im in

yea not bad the stucture was off and yer shortening the spelling throwes people off thats all remember that make your verse look like this

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yours is like this

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^you know what i mean? theres some easy help. there

Yeah, did you bring some niggas, cause i just saw someone wit naptown in there name

Yeah Naptown Crisis dats my nigga

yeah if you know G from there or something then you know hes dope at audio...and thats weerd wigga..

Fa sho X, Anamasity, try to shorten your approach in the fewest of words........

like this (quick freestyle)

I split braincells and translate lines to sharp swords,
Attack their thoat, and leave their mouths open more than street hoars....
Step to da reaper, is like givin your soul to a great cause
The time these niggas stood a change was when da beat paused.....

somethin to that effect........

^dope lines for a quick thing dawg...

Somethin like this
Dezz niggas dont wonna feel my holo tips
Im bout 2 teach all of these niggas that my AK runs faster then they lips
And i aint Georgie Bush or John Kerry i dont need votes
Cause my bullet runnin down yo mouf and are more suver then strep throat

saying votes and throat dont rhyme and you forced the 2nd line...and dont edit yer words like mouf its mouth dont fuck that up iight it throws people off...but yer stucture is a lil off make it like this:

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^^kinda like one straight line down the middle gives good shit...and yer punches need work but that will come in time after being here for a month or so...

OK i get u dont force shit into a line if it cant fit right

dayum its hard not to force shit i cant do it, its impssible lol...i was gonna show you but like i meen dont foce yer rhymes to work...you know...

but i dont wonna say some weak shit in a battle

hmm weerd i guess...well hmm its hard to explain cuz me i cant write a verse thats forced lol...ill try

bitch you cant suck a dick even if you were a mothers sick...
i know its bad for me to explain this shit but ima prick....

^^some wack shit the 1st line was the forced line..Mothers sick dont make sense thats forced...heres soem shit its still wack but heres some none forced stuff:

Who do you “think” you are 2pac yelling out ThugLife…
I “guess” you think you’re gonna stab me with a knife…
Naw, you couldn’t hurt a “fat” man and his stick of sausage…
After…...I beat your “thin” ass you gonna need a bandage…

i wanna join this man. lemme in i got lots of talent.

so u say just go wit it like this

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smoewhat like dat

how u keep gettin all these new pics on yo profile and i cant even get 1 of em

yo get @ me. answers.

no thats just stucture...keep it lined yes...but dont force yer rhymes is what im saying...

you need 500 posts to get these pics i found these pics of www.google.com and you can ask G to make you a sig like ones people have in thur sig..

Respect = lost for this crew.

Sorry Deuce, shitloads of spect for you.

aw fuck it ignoring me.

no were not talk to G hes not online now just wait..
o and distilled thats jsut cuz im hear...but i agree G takin to many newbs..

i say fuck newbies. damn get vets. i found that out. i dont like working with newbies. i'm gonna make my own crew.

go ahead make yer own crew it aint going anywhere unless yer a vet..and yer not..no hate just face the facts..thats why i dont make crews..

man i dont have to be a vet to get members. i'm good and thats all that matters.

weerd......im not saying anything else...nuff said...wikga

3. Phrensik
4. Bizzey

phrensik i guess u changed ya mind about violent type???

bizzey no dout good luck then ya....

Yo you already know wat good wit me ill take that....Other Co-Leader...Spot

^nope never heard you bfore

co-leader
 

yo i say yes to Killa Cam Flow shes good but not as good as me


Ok i say that the co-leader should be either me or .:xclusive:. cause we have been on a long time Ive been on scince the begining or RV and know how shit works

and xclusive i know what your gonna say no you havent but yess i have im under an alias i was the_crazy_one.

We have our crew forum up in the crew forums......I will make my decision on co-leader at a later date. And Killa Cam.....your in ight....

Ayo here is a couple of battles of mine in my sig. yall can check me out and VOTE please, and hit me back, and if those arent good enough, I'll post a keystyle here. ~~onez dun~~

aiight ill checkem out.....