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becuase i know you wouldnt be talking to me like an idiot if you knwo who i am
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C'mon, like I don't see it in ya sig...shuttup.
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So is this only for battle verses or what?
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Told you I elevated lol... |
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Aight coo... Pz... |
definitley..i want you guys criticism...leave feedback on my arch diss
Destroy And Rebuild The Warning Get Ya Wig Split.. leave the wrists slit of Nitwits Arch gotta stick his tongue in Revokes Ass to 'Spit Shit! U Beat Me in 2 lines...Ill murder u Unlimited He Feeling Himself Like His Hand And Dick Are Intimate! Beef Is Costly..This Creep? Killing Em Softly...Sleep... Someone Wake Em Like A Cup Of Coffee..An Get Em Off Me! Prem beat u But He Made A Mistake..Dis Champ Is So Fake When He "Drop Gold Bars" Its Just proof he Cant "Hold Weight"! U'll Neva "Blow Up" Pretend to be "Da Bomb" An Get Raped U Couldnt Be A 'Super Mod' if U Logged On With A Cape! Let the Machete Scrap..U CornBall Acter Like Chevy Chase.. All that extra water just equate to Arch being 'HeavyWeight' Fake Champ of RV? Im Switching My RapSite... Prems bar Had Em 'Go Up In Smoke' Like Fumes From Crack pipes! So Act Right! Serving Up Niggas Brown Blue Black White... Sit In my Throne..And Crush these 'Pussies' Like a Fat Dike! Those Punchline Leagues Is A joke.. Thats Just Reality.... Only Place u Crown A Heavy Weight Champ On A Technicality... U Not Even Moderately A Decent Moderate..U Rap Shitty! Far From King of this 'Jungle'..More Like Tigre From Rap City! A Host that Like pretending..You A Spinoff oF Revoke U Might Ass Well Go Elope...He Got His Dick Up Em Ya Throat! RIP to Strobe....Voice of reason... Only Mod I Respected... Cuz He Did His Job..And Arch Is Just Concerned With His Record.. Plus He Got So Many Groupies (D/R) It'll Make The 'Stars Drool' That Been Riding His Dick So Long....They All Carpool! (Arch: Comon Kids..In Ya Car seat we gotta another battle to steal) End It Now..^^^^^^Thats Filler 2 Me ..I Do That on Lunch Break.. |
Fuckin long ass verse...i'll do it soon.
This thread should bne helping some but im still getting ko'ed by Trase and his buddy list. Faggots. kthnxbye |
who owns soc?woo woo i do!!:)
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Get Ya Wig Split.. leave the wrists slit of Nitwits
Arch gotta stick his tongue in Revokes Ass to 'Spit Shit! played U Beat Me in 2 lines...Ill murder u Unlimited He Feeling Himself Like His Hand And Dick Are Intimate! feelin yaself junk is played... Beef Is Costly..This Creep? Killing Em Softly...Sleep... Someone Wake Em Like A Cup Of Coffee..An Get Em Off Me! lol...not good, but this was funny Prem beat u But He Made A Mistake..Dis Champ Is So Fake When He "Drop Gold Bars" Its Just proof he Cant "Hold Weight"! blah U'll Neva "Blow Up" Pretend to be "Da Bomb" An Get Raped U Couldnt Be A 'Super Mod' if U Logged On With A Cape! LMAO...I don't care, this was ill. Let the Machete Scrap..U CornBall Acter Like Chevy Chase.. All that extra water just equate to Arch being 'HeavyWeight' Wack Fake Champ of RV? Im Switching My RapSite... Prems bar Had Em 'Go Up In Smoke' Like Fumes From Crack pipes! blah So Act Right! Serving Up Niggas Brown Blue Black White... Sit In my Throne..And Crush these 'Pussies' Like a Fat Dike! LMAO...blah though Those Punchline Leagues Is A joke.. Thats Just Reality.... Only Place u Crown A Heavy Weight Champ On A Technicality... wack U Not Even Moderately A Decent Moderate..U Rap Shitty! Far From King of this 'Jungle'..More Like Tigre From Rap City! LMAO...u got some funny shit.. A Host that Like pretending..You A Spinoff oF Revoke U Might Ass Well Go Elope...He Got His Dick Up Em Ya Throat! wack RIP to Strobe....Voice of reason... Only Mod I Respected... Cuz He Did His Job..And Arch Is Just Concerned With His Record.. wack Plus He Got So Many Groupies (D/R) It'll Make The 'Stars Drool' That Been Riding His Dick So Long....They All Carpool! weak Had some witty shit...lmao@the SuperMod line...but u got some played punches...which brings down ya shit...think of some good concepts. |
Get Ya Wig Split.. leave the wrists slit of Nitwits
Arch gotta stick his tongue in Revokes Ass to 'Spit Shit! played concept, flipped badly U Beat Me in 2 lines...Ill murder u Unlimited He Feeling Himself Like His Hand And Dick Are Intimate! played, flipped poorly Beef Is Costly..This Creep? Killing Em Softly...Sleep... Someone Wake Em Like A Cup Of Coffee..An Get Em Off Me! k...not very hard though Prem beat u But He Made A Mistake..Dis Champ Is So Fake When He "Drop Gold Bars" Its Just proof he Cant "Hold Weight"! stop using " s.....its almost there U'll Neva "Blow Up" Pretend to be "Da Bomb" An Get Raped U Couldnt Be A 'Super Mod' if U Logged On With A Cape! lol coo Let the Machete Scrap..U CornBall Acter Like Chevy Chase.. All that extra water just equate to Arch being 'HeavyWeight' no Fake Champ of RV? Im Switching My RapSite... Prems bar Had Em 'Go Up In Smoke' Like Fumes From Crack pipes! played as fuck So Act Right! Serving Up Niggas Brown Blue Black White... Sit In my Throne..And Crush these 'Pussies' Like a Fat Dike! heh is iight Those Punchline Leagues Is A joke.. Thats Just Reality.... Only Place u Crown A Heavy Weight Champ On A Technicality... woooooord U Not Even Moderately A Decent Moderate..U Rap Shitty! Far From King of this 'Jungle'..More Like Tigre From Rap City! i get the concept but needs better wording A Host that Like pretending..You A Spinoff oF Revoke U Might Ass Well Go Elope...He Got His Dick Up Em Ya Throat! coo RIP to Strobe....Voice of reason... Only Mod I Respected... Cuz He Did His Job..And Arch Is Just Concerned With His Record.. weak Plus He Got So Many Groupies (D/R) It'll Make The 'Stars Drool' That Been Riding His Dick So Long....They All Carpool! coo (Arch: Comon Kids..In Ya Car seat we gotta another battle to steal)End It Now..^^^^^^Thats Filler 2 Me ..I Do That on Lunch Break no You are better than I took you for but still need to work on wording creativity and making punches harder in general. |
thanx.....but heres a foot note.....i did that in between calls at a citizens call center..in about 15 minutes..i got loads of shit for arch if he ever act like a man and challenge me..i cant waste all the good shit on an open mic
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Don't worry.
We don't care bout all that. We just judged what we have seen. :thumbup: Everyone peep this battle. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=73991 One of the best ever. |
^ Lemme guess... You're in it?
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wow, I wish I could rap like them...
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No.
I'm not anxiety. |
My comp got fucked up, I can't cope paste, so hit the link, copy paste it here so I can see..............................
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I guess i suck at guessing games :help: |
hot fucking battle socrates,,,makes me wanna go write punchlines
who the fuc is jb? he's pretty fucking good |
Like 'virgin asians' in 'porn' flicks, this bitch is gonna get 'torn'
Lmao at the quote, only time X seen pussy... ... Is when he was born! played Like 'gay men' addicted to 'druggs' this kid likes 'crack' And the "..." after your name leads to: "At being wack" helllllll no This kid threw a fit, cuz I got into classic and he wasn't let in the crew And it's sad, when to own X, posting his picture is all you have to do! lmao Xclusive with girls reminds me of handicaps playing in the N.B.A., he can't 'score' Site is his life, cuz last time X was out with freinds... ... He was in a computer store! good Keep working it was pretty damn good towards the end. But stop with all the damn explanations cuz as you see I didn't need em to get the punches. :thumbup: |
JB is an old RB head named Camarac
And Evolve is in RB's Hall of Fame.....alone And yes you are bad at it anxiety. ;) |
werd thanks, I didn't try in this one, n e ways :)
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I know, a bad habbit sorry :( i'll try not to do that............. |
yo peep this and give me some feedback
Socrates and Mike Hawk leaders the new leaders of the feedback clique Leave your verse and they'll get back to you once Mike's done sucking Soc's dick Hawk and Socrates live their life thru the net, that's why they never get laid They'd rather diss your battle verse and use cool words like, wack and plizayed Siskel and Ebert of Rapverse, destroy your whole ego, but don't have a clue Except instead of a thumbs up, thumbs down, if we hate it then it's a big Fuck You That's hizzzzotttttttt, word to ya mother Mike Hawk, Socrates in the house. :thumbup: yo i even made that shit orange like trigga, word up. |
This is an old battle against Blackwell, i hope ya'll kno who im talkin about, his record is BAD ne wayz;
With a record that's as bad as Shaq's freethrow sheet.... Is that why u hide it now, kause u know you're weak??.... Ima keep baggin on your record kause your rhyming is cheap.... When this battle is over, they'll find your remains in a garbage heap.... Around my way i'm considered a heat champ.... Kause my flows light up blocks like street lamps.... You can't ground my supersonic even if you started trying.... You betta go somewheres else wit them EBAY rhymes u buyin.... Toxic or toxin, panic your logic wit bare knuckle boxin.... Combinin punches, kicks, & elbows jus to add extra props in.... go eazy vets |
LMFAO@ Vango being completely ignored when he tried signing in to LLL.
Vango=garbage |
Yo socrates, are you coming in the council or joining in another crew???
N e ways, my comp can't copy paste so check this link and copy paste it here and rate it, yes I know hella strechted lines, ya don't gotta mention that http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162765 |
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Yo that shit was wack, LLL, but can you judge my verse and stay on subject. Socrates=Sensitive textcee :Offtopic: |
With a record that's as bad as Shaq's freethrow sheet....
Is that why u hide it now, kause u know you're weak??.... not a punch Ima keep baggin on your record kause your rhyming is cheap.... When this battle is over, they'll find your remains in a garbage heap.... no....look into the concept you had in the set up ;) Around my way i'm considered a heat champ.... Kause my flows light up blocks like street lamps.... never do self glorification....boooooooo! You can't ground my supersonic even if you started trying.... You betta go somewheres else wit them EBAY rhymes u buyin.... almost a good concept needs better wording Toxic or toxin, panic your logic wit bare knuckle boxin.... Combinin punches, kicks, & elbows jus to add extra props in.... i like for some reason You gotta look into what a punch is then you can start elevating cuz I see potential. |
head games......ya shit was aiight...but please never make me waste time reading troops garbage
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lmao......... ok ok fine :), but damn, I was rushed on that shit, s--t--r--e--c--h--e--d
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I'm not touching your's Vango....just know it was garbage.
Dunno about crews Head. Like women worried bout getting fat, troop watching his back, cuz i'm sick like sars... he's wack, evertime he raps it's a criminal offense, why else is he always behind bars! nope Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy... *troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money! LMFAO Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling... he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and... ...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading! straight fire Can't think of a punch, so just make a weak comparasin, troop rhymes bout as 'fat' as models... oh damn! wait, hold up! sorry bout that, my bad troop... was I coppying your style? no Jesus Christ the middle two bars wee dope, the others were garbage. Don't ever start a verse with bullshit anymore please. :( Keep workin hard. |
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soc answer the question....... read the rest |
I'm pretty sure you got the first punch, but just incase, it means behind bars like jail, also cuz he can only go 8 lines so he's always behind on bars, and ebnind bars meaning my bars are more advanced then his, just incase
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did ya get that??
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Still.........no.
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soc, you gonna do my verse or not?
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lmao....... ok, i'll take your word for it.... thanks, so are you gonna join the council or go into another crew??? |
I already said no homo boy.
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